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June 14th, 2012 #1
tried to finish something w/o you guys
tried to make her dark.
I really liked this last night,
problems im seeing the day after : lighting, tone.
I'm in that stalling suck period i think.
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This is really cool, I really like this piece! The face, however...doesn't look right...
June 15th, 2012 #3Registered User
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Everything is low key I understand that but you have a light that radiating out from a hole and it needs to shine. I brightened some things darkened others, tried to neutralized the solid purple you had cause there was just so much of it. If you have a solid purple/pinkish color like that try to neutralize it with some variations of green mixed with a hint of blue so its not so harsh on the the eyes. Good luck ^_^
June 23rd, 2012 #4
I like the mood of the piece it would be good to bring out the mid-tones in the darker regions but try not to lose the sense of mystery. You could subtlety hint at her silhouette towards the top but try not to make it too apparent as it may distract form that moodiness that the piece has as a whole.
A few hints at the structure around her would help place her in the environment. At the moment I assume she is in a cave.
It's progressing well.
June 26th, 2012 #5
Most everybody feels this way: just keep going. Even the greatest artists in history saw all there own flaws in the work they produced. The trick is to keep at it. Just understand that no matter how good you get, you will always see the flaws. By the way: cool concept, nice colors. Keep going!
June 28th, 2012 #6
Thanks guys sorry it took me so long to reply. I've been awol. I have some more confidence now. and ill be back with a redraw soon. Thank you (:
July 3rd, 2012 #7
Nice work. I really want to see the final version. I feel something is not right with her mouth, check its position with respect to the nose and perhaps some other structural issues (maybe somebody more expert than me can confirm). I do think there not a lot to do to make it awesome.
Edit: I just made an ugly overpaint to check the anatomy a bit. I think those shoulders are misplaced, the head may be too high also (her head is leaning forward, I think the chin should be lower). Feel free to disagree with it.
Last edited by Zelrik; July 3rd, 2012 at 10:07 PM.______________