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    Quote Originally Posted by Elwell View Post
    Have I mentioned lately how much I HATE HATE HATE the transparent bangs convention?
    No... But I love them! Haha, sorry bud, but I've been cranking the transparent bangs for ages... I can't escape them!

    But honestly, I just like being able to show some expression with the bangs still hanging over.
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    Quote Originally Posted by danlambert View Post
    If this is a wrap around cover, and the girl is the focus, you may want to flip the image. Also there's a large empty space to her left.
    Cheers, yep, I haven't done that yet. It was mainly cause my reference was facing the other way and I never got round to flipping it. But then I got used to drawing it that way and completely forgot about it.

    At the moment I really just wanted comments on anatomy and various other quirks, not so much composition as the author's pretty happy with the comp I sketched for him. But, it is a pretty open "in my free time" kinda project so it is changeable...

    The space is the title I'll put up a garbage comp for people to ogle at.
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    Garbage comp, this is the basic idea for the cover.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rick321 View Post
    Oh, well, the composition makes a bit more sense as a wrap-around. Will the girl be on the front cover? It might help to include the text that will be on book. Its placement is important, so it's a good thing to bring to critique early.School Girl Zombie SlayerSchool Girl Zombie SlayerSchool Girl Zombie Slayer
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    Quote Originally Posted by sweetchilliphil View Post
    Hahahaha, what is this!? No need to copy and repeat comments, I heard ya!
    Spam. Nuked. Pay no mind.

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    Another miniature update.

    Slowly throwing moar o' dem zombries. Rrrggahha...

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    Nice, quirky style you got going here. Is it me, or are her forearms a little too short?
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    Love it, very cool!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kveldvaahiim View Post
    Nice, quirky style you got going here. Is it me, or are her forearms a little too short?
    Definitely not just you. I really like how the zombies are coming along, but the main one's arms are a little stumpy, too.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elwell View Post
    Definitely not just you. I really like how the zombies are coming along, but the main one's arms are a little stumpy, too.
    Agreed. Thats what happens when you spread this little gig over a few days.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kveldvaahiim View Post
    Nice, quirky style you got going here. Is it me, or are her forearms a little too short?
    I'd say you're correct too. A mistake on my part, misinterpreted the ref pic, the model leans a little and it foreshortens her arms.
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    Had time to fix those arms, and add a few small details. Getting there!

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