i was watching alot of Feng Zhu's vids and it got me in the mood to do something so this is what i could put together from the random chaos!!
safe to say this my second time trying to do an environment..... not really that good
Ok but this is just a bunch of light probably on a surface. There's no human scale and nothing that can be compared to reality, in short this piece is floating nowhere without purpose in a viewers mind. It's ok if is just you having fun with brushes but is really bad if this thing is supposed to reach a possible viewer. You understand what i'm talking about?
What is the disc supposed to be? Like an alter flush with the ground. I defiantly see the walkway, but I bet most people won't. Try to add a few more details that ensure that the viewer can tell what's happening.