Zombie portrait
Join the #1 Art Workshop - LevelUpJoin Premium Art Workshop

Results 1 to 5 of 5

Thread: Zombie portrait

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Oct 2010
    Location
    Illinois
    Posts
    158
    Thanks
    24
    Thanked 24 Times in 22 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    Zombie portrait

    Hi, this is my first time posting in the Crit and W.i.p center, Hopefully not the last.
    I have been doing a bunch of self portraits recently and decided that I would like to polish this one up to add to my portfolio. I'm not sure what else to say.. so... have at it, I guess

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  2. #2
    TinyBird's Avatar
    TinyBird is offline Why you gotta be an angry burd Level 16 Gladiator: Spartacus' Retiarii
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    HELLsinki, Finland
    Posts
    4,753
    Thanks
    338
    Thanked 2,652 Times in 1,617 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    I'd suggest you take a look how real human teeth look and are positioned.

    "I eat comics and poop stylization"
    Comic!
    Sketchbook (Critiques, no compliments please.)
    Tumblr
    Website
    Livejournal
    DeviantArt
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  3. The Following User Says Thank You to TinyBird For This Useful Post:


  4. #3
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Billericay, UK
    Posts
    405
    Thanks
    37
    Thanked 241 Times in 94 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    I think you could make this more grose. Try looking at some disgusting things online for reference... if you can stomach it of course

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  5. The Following User Says Thank You to shrunkendesigner For This Useful Post:


  6. #4
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Location
    UK, London
    Posts
    17
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    i think you should do some studies on facial muscles and expressions to apply to this. it could also use more detail it kinda looks unfinished

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  7. The Following User Says Thank You to incognegro For This Useful Post:


  8. #5
    Join Date
    Oct 2010
    Location
    Illinois
    Posts
    158
    Thanks
    24
    Thanked 24 Times in 22 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Thank you all for your suggestions. I guess I never really noticed that I draw my teeth in sort of general teeth shapes, I never bothered to look up how many there actually were. Also I noticed that the angle of them was off.

    And indeed I could make it grosser, but Im not looking foreward to googling 'dead flesh'

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

Members who have read this thread: 0

There are no members to list at the moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •