Hello, and welcome to CA! From your first post, I would say that you should probably take the time to study perspective because your figures aren't quite existing in space properly. Other than that I think it's very nice. Keep up the good work, and keep posting!
Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment. Something felt off i just didn't know what. I have a class today focusing on that subject so hopefully i can learn some tips today. I am looking forward to improving my skills. Thank you again for commenting.