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Thread: Dark Angel's Gift

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    Dark Angel's Gift

    Hey everyone. I bounce back and forth, coming and going in these forums, and I realize now that I really need put my nose to the grind stone and work out a lot of my painting flaws if I ever want to get anywhere. So here's to a new beginning!

    I have this image that I've kept working on for more than 2 years now. I keep getting stuck on the shape of the girls neck on the left. I want to add warmer skin tones to express the shape change without changing much of the value but I keep getting caught up trying to model the clavicle and shoulder. I'm also having problems with rim lighting and... well I just really want to get the ground work done and all the under structure fixed before I begin detailing or changing lighting.

    All critiques are appreciated! I really want to get this one done, and I know I can do it with your help!

    Thanks, guys!

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    You already have a thread: why did you post this on a new one and the old one?
    Also I have to say that for two years worth of work, this image hasn't really improved.
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    Yes. There was an issue late last night where my original thread post, this one, wasn't showing up for quite some time. After waiting around 15 minutes I looked at my old threads and found the original to this piece. I thought there might have been an error so I posted to that one as well. Only to find out 5-10 minutes later that this one finally went through, as well as the image.

    I've taken an OLD version of this painting. It's gone through a lot of changes, and after 2 years of sitting in a folder I've decided the later changes just don't do. This was meant to be a fresh start to an old idea.
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