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    Ok .. so a lot of time have passed and I made lot's of changes ..
    I'm not 100% satisfied, but don't know what to do either ...


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    this looks much better now, especially the face, but the background looks too empty in my opinion, and maybe you could give to her clothes and the bird a bit more details.
    Also, if you add another color to the background, like orange, the image would improve.
    Because there is so many blue and i found the overall mood of the image boring.
    But it is only my opinion! just keep working.

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    You could move her over to the left. Right now most of the points of interest are smack in the center, except for the bird's head which is crowded to the right. Her flapping robe isn't all that interesting, I don't think it needs to take up a third of the picture.

    Also, the wings, feathers and legs on the bird are looking too stylized and simple. You should do more research into ostriches and ducks/swans and make the bird a bit more realistic.
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