pool

Join 500,000+ Artists

Its' free and it takes less than 10 seconds!

Join the #1 Art Workshop - LevelUpJoin Premium Art Workshop

Results 1 to 14 of 14

Thread: pool

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Posts
    75
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    pool

    er ... a pool?

    never been too good at drawing scenes or mecha stuff. so thought it would help if i tried practicing that kind of stuff more frequently

    maybe i should put some characters in here

    pool

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Last edited by Neil-W2; June 3rd, 2012 at 04:10 PM.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
    Location
    Cambridge UK
    Posts
    5,460
    Thanks
    6,454
    Thanked 4,519 Times in 2,457 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    the image is well composed. whats the action going to be?

    sb most art copied to page 1
    Weapons of Mass Creation 2011 ::: Add your favourites!
    skype: velocitykendall
    facebook: Alface Killah
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  4. #3
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Posts
    15
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    I reckon it would be fun exercise to pick a theme or style out of a hat and apply it to this scene. Make it a post apocalyptic swimming pool for instance.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  5. #4
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Posts
    75
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    uh, i'm not really certain haven't thought about the action
    actually i'm not really certain what that means, how do you determine an action for a scene?

    post apocalyptic swimming pool sounds like a really scary thing to try out
    challenging yourself is supposed to help you grow and improve quicker. but if you focus on too many things at a time, doesn't that stump your growth?

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  6. #5
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Posts
    15
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Hey sorry I didnt mean to go into specifics, I just mean that since you seem to have a nice composition going, it would be nice to see some tone and colour.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  7. #6
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Posts
    75
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    pool

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  8. #7
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Posts
    75
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    pool

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  9. #8
    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Location
    Toronto
    Posts
    1,229
    Thanks
    189
    Thanked 225 Times in 213 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Ok, thats better, but I would change the wall colour to something else, maybe a light beige.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  10. #9
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    Haifa, Israel
    Posts
    4,120
    Thanks
    2,352
    Thanked 2,320 Times in 1,427 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    I'm probably too late to the feast, but I think your perspective is a little off. Check it with a ruler.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  11. #10
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Posts
    75
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    i have no idea what llight beige means, guess ill look it up on google or something

    and yeah i was thinking the exact same thing, that the perspective is looking a little wonky. things like layouts and perspectives never been really my strong suite, but i keep trying them out anyways :/

    guess ill try addressing these things next time i visit this piece

    thanks ^^

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  12. #11
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Posts
    75
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    pool

    oh beige kinda like this website
    or a flesh color ... yeah ...
    im trying it out but i dont think i like it :/

    i remember painting my basement beige ... and regretting it -_-;;

    any more critiques? cause id like to finish this up

    ... and my image isnt displaying T_T ill try and fix that later, kinda falling behind schedual

    Last edited by Neil-W2; June 3rd, 2012 at 04:04 PM.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  13. #12
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Posts
    75
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    ah there we goes

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  14. #13
    Join Date
    Apr 2011
    Posts
    142
    Thanks
    45
    Thanked 69 Times in 51 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    This is just an opinion, but I think the walls are too dark. When I think of swimming pools, I think huge light rooms with equally huge windows.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  15. #14
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Posts
    75
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    pool

    still think walls are a bit dark?
    i just know someone is gonna come online and propose some more suuggestions which is fine

    but im getting kinda tired of working on this
    i dont think it came out very well T_T

    -------------------------------------------

    aw ... it didnt work T_T
    ill fix it later T_T

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

Members who have read this thread: 0

There are no members to list at the moment.

Tags for this Thread

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
  • 424,149 Artists
  • 3,599,276 Artist Posts
  • 32,941 Sketchbooks
  • 54 New Art Jobs
Art Workshop Discount Inside
Register

Developed Actively by vBSocial.com
The Art Department
SpringOfSea's Sketchbook