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er ... a pool?
never been too good at drawing scenes or mecha stuff. so thought it would help if i tried practicing that kind of stuff more frequently
maybe i should put some characters in here
Last edited by Neil-W2; June 3rd, 2012 at 04:10 PM.
the image is well composed. whats the action going to be?
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I reckon it would be fun exercise to pick a theme or style out of a hat and apply it to this scene. Make it a post apocalyptic swimming pool for instance.
uh, i'm not really certain haven't thought about the action
actually i'm not really certain what that means, how do you determine an action for a scene?
post apocalyptic swimming pool sounds like a really scary thing to try out
challenging yourself is supposed to help you grow and improve quicker. but if you focus on too many things at a time, doesn't that stump your growth?
Hey sorry I didnt mean to go into specifics, I just mean that since you seem to have a nice composition going, it would be nice to see some tone and colour.
i have no idea what llight beige means, guess ill look it up on google or something
and yeah i was thinking the exact same thing, that the perspective is looking a little wonky. things like layouts and perspectives never been really my strong suite, but i keep trying them out anyways :/
guess ill try addressing these things next time i visit this piece
oh beige kinda like this website
or a flesh color ... yeah ...
im trying it out but i dont think i like it :/
i remember painting my basement beige ... and regretting it -_-;;
any more critiques? cause id like to finish this up
... and my image isnt displaying T_T ill try and fix that later, kinda falling behind schedual
Last edited by Neil-W2; June 3rd, 2012 at 04:04 PM.
ah there we goes
This is just an opinion, but I think the walls are too dark. When I think of swimming pools, I think huge light rooms with equally huge windows.
still think walls are a bit dark?
i just know someone is gonna come online and propose some more suuggestions which is fine
but im getting kinda tired of working on this
i dont think it came out very well T_T
aw ... it didnt work T_T
ill fix it later T_T