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    pool

    er ... a pool?

    never been too good at drawing scenes or mecha stuff. so thought it would help if i tried practicing that kind of stuff more frequently

    maybe i should put some characters in here



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    the image is well composed. whats the action going to be?

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    I reckon it would be fun exercise to pick a theme or style out of a hat and apply it to this scene. Make it a post apocalyptic swimming pool for instance.

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    uh, i'm not really certain haven't thought about the action
    actually i'm not really certain what that means, how do you determine an action for a scene?

    post apocalyptic swimming pool sounds like a really scary thing to try out
    challenging yourself is supposed to help you grow and improve quicker. but if you focus on too many things at a time, doesn't that stump your growth?

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    Hey sorry I didnt mean to go into specifics, I just mean that since you seem to have a nice composition going, it would be nice to see some tone and colour.

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    Ok, thats better, but I would change the wall colour to something else, maybe a light beige.

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    I'm probably too late to the feast, but I think your perspective is a little off. Check it with a ruler.

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    i have no idea what llight beige means, guess ill look it up on google or something

    and yeah i was thinking the exact same thing, that the perspective is looking a little wonky. things like layouts and perspectives never been really my strong suite, but i keep trying them out anyways :/

    guess ill try addressing these things next time i visit this piece

    thanks ^^

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    oh beige kinda like this website
    or a flesh color ... yeah ...
    im trying it out but i dont think i like it :/

    i remember painting my basement beige ... and regretting it -_-;;

    any more critiques? cause id like to finish this up

    ... and my image isnt displaying T_T ill try and fix that later, kinda falling behind schedual

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    ah there we goes

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    This is just an opinion, but I think the walls are too dark. When I think of swimming pools, I think huge light rooms with equally huge windows.

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    still think walls are a bit dark?
    i just know someone is gonna come online and propose some more suuggestions which is fine

    but im getting kinda tired of working on this
    i dont think it came out very well T_T

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    aw ... it didnt work T_T
    ill fix it later T_T

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