I spent almost two hours trying to get this pose to look right without reference (just trying some personal improvement) so any input would help, as I've been staring at it for a while now haha.
im not too good at anatomy myself, but I think youre fine with it here. the head looks a little blocky but over all, this is great. good job
Nice start for getting used to drawing anatomy without reference - I always draw silly poses to train myself too. So, that being said, I'm not going to argue pose with you. I have, however, attempted a redline to point out some anatomy flaws that I can see if you want to keep this pose. Please ignore my terrible child-like writing.
Kveldvaahiim has the right idea with the bottom right bit of 'childish writing': acting it out is going to help greatly here, I think.
Just pretend you're a hunk with a bow and do some pose-striking. Even without a mirror or webcam this is going to add some believability and purpose to this thing.
Like it so far though. There's not enough firm, manly buttocks around.
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