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Thread: My KaOtIC' Journey
May 5th, 2012 #1
My KaOtIC' Journey
Hey guys I am a 22 year old guy from India aspiring to become a great concept artist one day .I hav never went to art school and I havnt taken any formal art training (I might be takin it any time soon :p).So I thought i would start a Sketch book to improve my concept art skills and I will be updating daily ..do be tuned in ....... crtique on any work is very much appreciated
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May 7th, 2012 #2
This is a study of mountains / landscape am trying to practice it and establish my work....attached some WIp of mecha hunt
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May 12th, 2012 #3
My work is almost finalised ......hurray
May 15th, 2012 #4
Some more works in progress
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May 20th, 2012 #5
This is another concept i thught of .......
May 20th, 2012 #6
Really cool stuff!! I shouldn't be the one saying this: You should refine them more, give them sharper edges(i have the same problem :C) Post #4's middle picture is maybe too skewed, if you reduced it a tad.
The monster& mech vs soldier scene look really amazing good work on those!!
The mountain study need more detail Good luck!!
May 24th, 2012 #7
Thx stpete i was tryin thumbnails 1st tryin to make proper thumbnails/compositon here are some more studies of feng zgu and some environtments
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August 20th, 2012 #15
looks good man
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August 23rd, 2012 #17
@ Faeber Thx man
@ physco yes Ur right ... i wil definately work on them
These are a couple of thumbnails i did for paths through hell ..... was thinkin of scalin up the images when i get some time
August 23rd, 2012 #18
I like your pieces here dude, you have cool imagination, wish i can those, all the best!
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August 30th, 2012 #21
Your thumbnails are fantastic, keep it up!
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September 25th, 2012 #23
Doing studies of master landscape artists .... here are a few studies ....wil be doing them all week .... my main focus is colour n value
September 25th, 2012 #24
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September 25th, 2012 #25
Ooooh these are some nice sketches!
A few reccomendations for a couple of comps; try getting the focal point and rhythm to be more clear. In that lake with the mountains and the waterfall, the focal mountain points upwards very severely, leading the viewers eyes upwards to nowhere and killing the rhythm of it. Even a slight tilt to the angle of the top of the mountain will make it look better. For the first image of post 24, there is too much space on the top, and like the last pic I critiqued; the trees point upwards yet there is nothing there except for a few transparent clouds.
Other than that, keep them coming, the comps are nice!!!
September 25th, 2012 #26
Seeing lots of improvement here! Those landscape studies are veeery nice, keep them coming!
September 27th, 2012 #27
@Sandy ... thx for the crit man wil work on improving the focal point ..@ nouge Thnk U .....Here are another couple of colour studies lol ..... colours are amazing to work with
September 27th, 2012 #28
I really like where your stuff is heading.. But possibly try and get some harder edges into your work? I feel it's just a bit too blurry, and needs some clarification. Keep at it.
September 27th, 2012 #29
thanks for a visit
all is heading in good direction, what is visible especially in "dragon rider" piece
doing master studies is good idea, but i think you should spent more time on each of them, describe details, textures, shapes, make it more finished
also put more attention to hard and soft edges
keep it up!
September 27th, 2012 #30
Very good start on your sb! I really like where you're headed. Keep working and you'll be fabulous, seriously!
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