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  1. #1
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    Finally finished.. portrait of young girl oil on canvas

    Hi ,

    I finished this today afternoon. few parts may still look wet . I made this after a gap of nearly 4 months. Please comment and critic my work

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    One half of her face looks natural, the other half has some weird 80's glam rock make up. Bright blue eyeshadow, sharp triangle of hot pink blush, and it even looks like that half of her mouth has shiny red lipstick.

    It's like you divided her face perfectly down the middle and switched color palettes. Maybe the colors are more subtle in real life. My monitor tends to mess things up. There are more important things to crit than color, I guess. But I found it really distracting.

    I like eyes, the nose looks cartoony and the mouth looks wonky. Her hair looks pretty, I love the slight curls. Why does she have yellow and peach glowing outlines around her?

    'Cuz life is full of your regrets, and I should be one...
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