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May 10th, 2012 #31
Hiya Everyone !
I worked on the 5th thumb, it's definitly gone away from the sacrifice theme which I don t mind since ill be doin this for my portfolio. Non the less I'll still do the sacrifice piece from the above view.
I got the feeling that I lost her beauty while rendering the details.
I tried to do more silhouette like Artfix suggested but it seemed odd so I gave in a little more light.
So whats your oppinion on the piece ? -> It's still WIP
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You have a hand which appears to coming out of the top of her arm,and there is no arm attached to her other shoulder to suggest its attached
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May 10th, 2012 #33
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May 10th, 2012 #34
u mean i should rather take a pic of me than of my girlfriend =) that would be just half as fun ^^
oh damn i fucke dup the ear big time ... u get so blind when u work for a longer time at the same thing
*gets the camera*
May 11th, 2012 #35
Are her arms long enough? I don't think her arms are long enough.
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May 11th, 2012 #36
nope they are too short, i too some refpics yesterday and hopefully i'll have enough time to complete her surgery over the weekend ^^.
May 13th, 2012 #37
on the first one, if you can get her eyes to focus on the specter, you'll have a winner.
all this stuff is just top notch, in my amateur opinion.
May 14th, 2012 #38
Define the bottom left corner maybe? Right now, she could be coming out of a portal, a magical tornado or a hole in a tree for all we know. If the dark stuff is just the other end of the specter, then her butt should be at least partially visible behind the end of the tail.
On a side note, the bone around her eye seem a little odd. Like her eye is poking out of the face somehow.
May 14th, 2012 #39
Is she suppose to be looking away from the summoned monster worm thing?
May 15th, 2012 #40
She's supposed to be lookin at the monster thingy, i redid most of the parts yet have to work on the monster thingy which i think wil be the least difficult but lets see ... what do u think ?
May 15th, 2012 #41
Great work so far! I did a little overpaint to help out, or maybe not xD anyways... I think you could make much more out of the lighting. push the glowing monster thing forward and bringing the lights on the girls face..i also croped it just a little.
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May 15th, 2012 #42
lovely hands and lighting, i thought.
shes looking somewhere off below the monster, and theres something funny on her back.
those little things aside i think shes good to go for now, lets see the monster!
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May 18th, 2012 #43
Hey Folks !
It's been a while but i feel like i finally come to an end with this piece.
I wandered quiet far from "classical sacrifice pice" more to lovely ghostbusting
The overpaint with the lightning was something I discarded a while ago since I wanted to go with a silhoutte in the mid tones.
May 19th, 2012 #44
May 19th, 2012 #45
Watch the tangents on her left hand...two brutal ones there. Also that intense white just hurts my eyes and is distracting. I would reverse that and make that go into shadowy darkness which allows the creature to be the light source and allows her to be illuminated by its glow.
May 20th, 2012 #46
Thx 4 the feedback, but I'll stick to the backlighting, spent too much time at this piece already ^^ painting that would make me do the whole thing again since it would mean a major change to values even though it might be interesting. Good point on the tangents will change that for the final version.