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April 30th, 2012 #1
WIP Portait Crits Appreciated :)
ive drawn and painted traditionally for a few years now i even bought an intuous a few years back but i didnt came along with it at all!
NOW i unpacked it again and did this portrait.
still got problems with smoothing and stuff!
so if you want knock yourselves out and critizise the hell out of this piece!
its a german polititian i think germans will know him
Last edited by Saras; April 30th, 2012 at 04:24 PM. Reason: forgot to attach image
Hide this ad by registering as a memberApril 30th, 2012 #2
Helmut Kohl listening to his Ipod? Hahahahah, yes, brilliant.
His fingers on the right hand (his left hand) are unnervingly small, but I think it works - it makes him look fatter.
The other hand doesn't look like it's supposed to be like that, it looks more like a flipper.
What you could add, just for fun, is a more irregular distribution of light or a more interesting composition. Research what you can make this photo more interesting:
Geometric shapes of light behind the person?
Interaction with background:
(the sites jazzinphoto.wordpress.com and photo-tractatus on Flickr are fantastic ressources)
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April 30th, 2012 #3
wow thank you already!
his fingers!! oh my gosh i didnt even see this... your so absolutly right!!