Dear ladies and gentlemen,
I hope you're all fine and hopefully in a good mood, hm or maybe even better in bad mood, which would make the critique more honest :-). I hope you can help me, any kind of advice, suggestion and critique is very appreciated.
This is a picture I did for a student work, it means to show the fact that due to the rural exodus, especially by women there is a mismatch of gender on the farmside, which leads to the mostly lonely farmer.
Hm lol please excuse my bad English, doesn't even know if my description makes sense. Anyway I hope at least you got a slightly impression and have maybe some good ideas and harsh critique how i could improve the work due to composition, style, anatomy, lighting, color etc.
(I think for example the smoke looks strange, but i'm not sure how to do it right now, the motion blur on the bus kind of fails too)
Thanks in advance and all the best to you!