"I was kinda lost at the relevance......what are you talking about?..not paying attention to what's even being shown.doesn't apply-"
ha ha well fair enough bud. If you cant tell the difference or see anything worth learning there then you have bigger problems than poorly composed images.
put it this way, those images are awesome, and you can always learn a lot from awesome work.
we're just a sample of randoms. you can be assured if we think stuff about your image, others will be too. we're trying to help you. its no skin of our noses if you decide to ignore our advice.
im telling you now and im telling you straight, the daz figures look like corpses being jiggled around. its not working.
these are from sfrancian's and might help.
Look at the difference between your image, and something by Craig Mullins.
Look at his lighting, and compostiion, and rendering. its masterful.