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    focusing on Aoife, and the head needed to go. You were about that Adrian it was just awkward posture. Time to hit the road for work but still not happy with hair. Maybe a mask?
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    @Rhdnor , like that concept alot, lol i also have a picture where aoife is sitting on the same shoulder
    everyone else doing awesome


    and damn , the standards are rinsing with each post
    and and, i need C and C for this piece
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    Early WIP. Awesome concepts from everyone else! I'm really liking this topic.
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    new pose...of head....small update....

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    Thought id start with a model sheet since there's two characters, I dunno if her head looks too big?

    marko - that looks sik, really like the specularity on the paneling front leg, has nice Pop/

    Devilminer - WOW nice, really had to sit an marvel at the detail for a while. This might be a winner, looking forward to seeing what your do for Aiofe.

    Slowdaddy - props for going toony, always like to see some variety .

    Nice work everyone else too, just saw that its 3am so i should probably hit the hay.
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    Quote Originally Posted by M!CK View Post
    I dunno if her head looks too big?
    Hi M!CK...first of all, nice design, i like the character. About your question, no sure if the head, but there are some issues with the proportions, mostly the shoulders are to wide for a little girl and the arms are looking a little short.

    cheers.
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    hey M!CK, i like the way you painted the little girl, but one thing that bugs me is the book shes holding, its out of perspective. besides that i think the little girls got a cute face!

    heres mine, sketches..

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    It's funny, I just finished the IOW #200 (before this was out), and it ended up looking like it would fit into this theme. I'll post it, maybe it can inspire someone. I don't know that i have the time or the courage to jump in on this one. Awesome stuff everyone for SURE!

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    Some seriously cool WIPs coming in here!

    A bit more work on mine - I re-did the composition to emphasise the size of the guardian. First thumbs are playing around with the colour scheme - I think I'm going to go for the middle one. Second is a close-up of Aoife - I will come back to her hands!!!
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    AdrianNagorski, thanks for the critique... I really didn't want to make anything too "aggro" but I thought it would be a suspenseful moment. Her guardian is always on alert.
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    Aoife and Her Guardian

    This is the first thing that came to me after I read the brief ...
    "Creativity emerges only when the imagination is given the freedom it deserves."
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    Well here is my progress so far, what do you guys think
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    Wow, I missed these boards and the perpetual excitement that surrounds ChoW. I made a sketch last night which I will post later, but first a few asspats and critiques...

    @Mitze: My favourite one so far. I love the idea behind the character, her blocking and the guardian's. I like the looseness of your lines. Being in sketch stage, I don't know where you're taking it yet, but hoping to see some tightness in a few areas to offset the loose quality later on.

    @Pixeltuner: You're a machine with those thumbnails and concepts. I think I like the design of the guardian on the second image you posted in the first page. Interested in how you will tighten up your final.

    @Paper Jester: I like where you're going with the guardian so far. It kind of reminds me of the EVA's in N.G.E. I am not a big fan of the plump faced expression of Aoife though, more of a preference thing.

    @Daniorr: I like your guardian silhouettes. Looking forward to more.

    @Devilminer: Another awesome one. The most inventive guardian design so far. So much mech goodness here. The scale is also perfect. Looking forward to seeing this finished.
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