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    ShizophreniE's Sketchbook

    Hi there!

    My name is Lisa. I am 15 (18 now). I've been following this site for several months, but I was afraid to create my own sketchblog ._. But after I was advised to do it, I finally make up my mind.
    I paint nearly 3 years, so I would like to have greater progress. I would be very grateful for the constructive critique and advices.

    (Im very sorry for my english. :c )
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    a couple of sketches that I made yesterday inspired by Zbigniew Preisner's music.
    I tried to create a good composition by using tones ._.
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    Drawing designs of clothes really interesting

    and yes, i have really serious problems with anatomy ._.
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    You have an excellent start for a 15 year old; I can't even draw this well, I've practiced for over a year and I'm soon turning 21. Keep it up.
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    Trisquel, thank you <:

    Gift to my friend, Today is his Birthday.
    I tried to draw the background.And it looks awful. I just hate myself >:C
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    I like the use of patterns and texturing you got goin on! It shows a nice class of detail. I'm not sure if you're going for stylistic or realistic, but whatever you're going for- you go girl. It's good to start being "serious-minded" at this young age. Peace!!
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    poetry man, thank you c: im going for semi-realistic

    on the 4th already become tired :c
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    Think you've made a great start, gunna wait to see more before I crit I think
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    I think you are doing great. Why don't you post some drawings?
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    GEB, thank you! This week is last at school, so i'll have a lot of time for drawing soon.

    Cojac, thanks! It's because I don't have any completed drawings which I would like to show here D: They are all have simple composition, colours and a lot of mistakes in anatomy :C It's one of them.

    The second isn't finished. I will add colour and more details soon >:
    Car is from photo.
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    A comment on the painting you did for your friend’s birthday. The central figure, or focus, is rendered beautifully. Because the figure is your focal point you get a pass on the background. Or rather if you render the back ground any further you’ll run into the issue of the background “fighting” the figure in the foreground. So don’t worry about it to much.

    The only real criticism I could give is that the elbow of the black arm look a bit weird but I couldn’t give you any advice on how to fix it.

    Overall it is a fantastic piece. It is better then many American published work that I have seen. It is better then my published work.

    Good work. Show us what else you can do.
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    DHLarson, thank you very much for critique!

    1. study from photo
    2-3. quick drawings (2-3 hours each <:C)

    I can't draw anything normal now , due to crisis. Shame on me! D:
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