My name is Lisa. I am 15 (18 now). I've been following this site for several months, but I was afraid to create my own sketchblog ._. But after I was advised to do it, I finally make up my mind.
I paint nearly 3 years, so I would like to have greater progress. I would be very grateful for the constructive critique and advices.
(Im very sorry for my english. :c )
Last edited by ShizophreniE; May 4th, 2015 at 04:41 AM.
I like the use of patterns and texturing you got goin on! It shows a nice class of detail. I'm not sure if you're going for stylistic or realistic, but whatever you're going for- you go girl. It's good to start being "serious-minded" at this young age. Peace!!
A comment on the painting you did for your friend’s birthday. The central figure, or focus, is rendered beautifully. Because the figure is your focal point you get a pass on the background. Or rather if you render the back ground any further you’ll run into the issue of the background “fighting” the figure in the foreground. So don’t worry about it to much.
The only real criticism I could give is that the elbow of the black arm look a bit weird but I couldn’t give you any advice on how to fix it.
Overall it is a fantastic piece. It is better then many American published work that I have seen. It is better then my published work.