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I did this quite I bit ago, was afraid to post this considering this one of my best works so far, the fingers were giving me problems so i skipped them... and completely forgot to go back and finish them *face-palm*
I do know I have poor shading and line art in most of my drawings, I can never seem to make things pop. any advice?
There are plenty of issues to critique, but first: Draw those hands! Don't be lazy! (Use a mirror and your own hands as reference.)
To be honest the very best thing you could do is draw some apples and onions from life. Use any medium other than digital for your life studies.
Funnily enough I am actually in the process of drawing two apples with charcoal right now...
The single piece of advice to address ALL these issues is: leave computer alone for a while, get pencils and paper, and learn structural drawing. Draw simple everyday objects from life for practice, and learn to build formal perspective. That'll occupy you for a few months at least.
It's a robot isn't it? Well, however you wanted the automaton to be, then that's how you wanted to construct it. Make it a bit shinier though, I'd think the that the eyes and the rings about the legs would be a bit glowing. I'm no expert on lighting and shadows(believe me, look at my stuff), but I figure it might need to be a bit hazy or like blinding due to the glow of it.
Otherwise it's pretty good so far, get a bit of practice in on things you might not do, please these gladiators and you will go far on this site. Keep ya' chin up and a smile on ya face, look up and keep doin' a good job.
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One the most underrated and overlooked things most do when they give good advice like this one is one of the most important factors for practicing.
THINK about what you are drawing. Ask yourself questions as to why this works or why this looks right. Analyze what you are doing and for what purpose you want the figure to serve and how you want the figure to appear to the viewer.
Figure is in motion. Okay, what kind of feeling do you want the viewer to get when they look at this figure in action. Dynamic? Casual? Thinking and understanding about what your figure is doing and why will help you in the more advanced stages of picture making.
Oh, and always have a background of somekind, with color. Setting effects the look of color on the figure.
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