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    BMX Miska in critique


    I'd like to ask your critique for my work presented here.

    With this work I wanted to be able to have bear on a BMX bike. I wanted it to be semi-realistic, anatomically right and most of all my goal was to practice Contre Jour and Edge Lighting. It was a challenge to make the fur look right in this lighting. I also wanted to have his arm lines kinda leading the eye of the viewer to the "BearMX" text. To make it like slogan, like the bear is proving to you that he can do BMX at least as well as you can.

    Many thanks for you help!

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    Yours seems to be pretty top-heavy:
    Attachment 1460957
    "I eat comics and poop stylization"
    Sketchbook (Critiques, no compliments please.)

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    That is very true! Thanks.

    Even that bear's anatomy has similarities to human's I still made a mistake and made my bear's structure too human, almost 100% human. Also remarkable note is that the wide of its head with fur and everything is almost as wide as the torso. Interesting...

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