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Thread: The Orb Keeper

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    The Orb Keeper

    My new job, hope you like it..

    C&C are very welcome!!!!!
    Rafael Nascimento

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    I like the lights but this time your foreground is punching your image under the belt. I think you're good Raphael but you don't have patience. If you have a reflex camera why don't you try to recreate your shot with similar elements? You need 2 light sources, a sphere or whatever as the subject and a stone for the foreground. I'm 100% sure if you focus your lens on the subject to have that kind of fading effect behind it you can't read anything about the stone if not some bokeh effects but in your image you have lots of sharp details. Even the mage will result out of focus but you can cheat on that cause is your second subject, the thing you don't want to do is to add so much details around him cause you will call the viewer eye into that area.

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