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    Greed WIP sketch need critics

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    I wanted to draw bones on her back and hands coming off, and her hands are suppose to be half flesh half bones..just want critic in general for proportion and the composition of the piece. Thanks!

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    the back of the head and the hands coming out of the back are too large.

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    Considering the character is apparently supposed to embody Greed, it might make more sense if the hands were more aggressive and grabby looking/feeling, rather than graceful "giving" type of hands. And what is she doing with her main hands? Right now she looks like she's playing and invisible harp or something like that. Also the sketch doesn't really say "bone", but the spikes look more like coral. Bones are generally smooth and lean, not jagged, spiky and lumpy in texture/shape.
    Study arm bones and if possible, actually get a hold of some bones (like, buy couple chicken legs and boil the bones clean).

    Also yes, the head is too large for the face.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TinyBird View Post
    Considering the character is apparently supposed to embody Greed, it might make more sense if the hands were more aggressive and grabby looking/feeling, rather than graceful "giving" type of hands. And what is she doing with her main hands? Right now she looks like she's playing and invisible harp or something like that. Also the sketch doesn't really say "bone", but the spikes look more like coral. Bones are generally smooth and lean, not jagged, spiky and lumpy in texture/shape.
    Study arm bones and if possible, actually get a hold of some bones (like, buy couple chicken legs and boil the bones clean).

    Also yes, the head is too large for the face.
    I fallowed your advice and made changes to the bones I think they look more like bones now, changes to hands and head size ^O^ ty! I feel like there can be some decorations on the bones..it kind of look boring now or is it gona be too much if i add something?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hildegard52 View Post
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