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    Hey, been working on this piece for a few days now, kind of a sci fi venice, a city riddled with crime, corruption and overpopulation, any critique would be really helpful

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    This is a Pretty cool idea, Your perspective is quite off though, next time start out one of these by drawing out some guide lines from a central vanishing point and draw the buildings from there.

    Also you may want to bring out those orange lights a bit more,

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    Overpopulation? Looks pretty empty to me. Might be a good idea to add some life to the scene. Some lights and some people could be just the thing.

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