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    Environments and cool stuff (moved from FF)

    Trying to step into the concept field and brush up my environment skills, I would love some critiques please!
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    You missed some spots to the left focal point out there. And you're loosing your audience by having that huge hole of brightness up to the left cause the eye tend to go away from that spot cause the brightest thing is generally what eye tend to look the most. You need to choose what you want to show to your viewer and catch his eyes in that spot, it's a basic rule but not always known or said

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    Thanks I really appreciate the input! I'll definitely keep that mind for future work.
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    Vlad Tepes

    A current character design I'm working on
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    World's only consulting detective

    I've been dying to do a Benedict Cumberpatch portrait, tell me what you think!
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    Good portrait, it looks just like him.

    His Hand is too blurry(fingers) and its maybe also slightly oversized but I am not entirely certain so need 2nd opinon on that.

    it seems almost as though you spent more time on polishing and smoothing the cloths than the actual figure because they don't have any of thes rough strokes.

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    Quote Originally Posted by denidimochka View Post
    A current character design I'm working on
    Good lord,that poor man's neck twisting like that must really hurt.
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    We're Twins

    I never know what to put in these message things
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    that guy looks like Elric of Menilboné
    "Every champion was once a challenger who refused to give up"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Eddy Montana View Post
    that guy looks like Elric of Menilboné
    Its actually Luke Goss in hellboy 2, but yea pretty much the same thing.
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    Name:  kingdom palace8.png
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    some new stuff
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