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    Hellgaurd Take 1

    just a sequential for the comic idol comic
    Hellgaurd Take 1


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    This is very nicelly executed page, layout, imho, is good and now i would like to see it in color!
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    I think you would get a better snse of motion in the last 2 frames if you pulled out more..and showed off more of the character(s)...having just the motion lines in medium close-up makes them look to static.

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    thanx for the input guys and yeah i agree on the bad crop for those panels ill keep that in mind for the next page

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