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    Zombie Outbreak and an Unfortunate Schoolteacher

    I came up with this WIP for an Illustration class. I know I have a ways to go on this one, so I really appreciate any and all feedback.

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    I understand that this is an early block in, but before you move to a more finished level make sure you find proper reference for a school bus and broken glass. Also, if you add more children to the foreground it would be creepier, fill the composition better, and add some layering/complexity.

    I know you've spent some time drawing the zombie children, but if you started a new composition with a lower perspective it would be more dramatic.
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    Also, if I'm not mistaken this would probably be better suited for the WIP sub forum.
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