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    Spirited Away

    Sorry, I know this sketch is pretty messy and basic, but I would like to get feedback before I start going full-out on this. I wanted to work on child-like faces and toothy grins, because those are real trouble spots for me. So I decided to try and go for a sort-of-realistic bust Chihiro from Spirited Away.
    Now the thing is, I know something here is wrong. I'm just not sure what. She looks a bit older than I was going for, and I'm not sure if the head is the right size. There seems to be a lot of underlying problems that I can't figure out, so I figured I'd try and get people who are more professional than me to have a look... I know it's not very good, but hey, that's why I'm here. I appreciate any advice I can get.
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    I think the main thing making her look older is that she has quite a thick neck (children's necks being thinner). Another thing is the head is quite small for a child -- try making the shoulders narrower. (As usual, check Loomis on this one.)

    There's a pretty long recent thread about the issue of how to make characters look like children, here. Got a lot of useful advice in there, particularly towards the end. But to summarise: minimise wrinkles, and pay the most attention to where the eyes sit and how long the nose area is (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neoteny).

    Did you use a reference? If not, you should. If so, post here if you want more detailed comments.
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    Soften her features and narrow her neck/shoulders down. it's likely best to follow Lulie's advice, but I made a redline anyway since I'm bored. It's certainly not very comprehensive, but it does show what a minimum amount of change can do already.

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    @Lulie Ah, and here I was thinking the head was too big when it was very obviously too small. Staring at the same picture for too long can do things to you, I guess, haha. Thank you for the advice. I was using a reference, but I just realized it was for an older girl than I wanted. New one shown below.
    @kevinsano thank you, that redline was really helpful. I'm kind of hesitant to go that small in comparison to the head, to be honest. It makes her look a bit too young imo, remembering that Chihiro is 10 in the movie. Please tell me if I'm wrong, in which case I will stop being an idiot and take your advice.
    Below is the newer sketch and my newer reference
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    Don't outline all the individual teeth, that's a quick route to really creepy-looking people.

    The problem with sketching everything out using lines is that lines are high-contrast while often edges in real life are not high-contrast. Your eye sees the edge so your hand puts a fat black line there but the line is too much and reads as a bigger gap or deeper wrinkle than you meant it to be. If you need to add a subtle edge somewhere you can do it when you're colouring.
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    Quote Originally Posted by vineris View Post
    Don't outline all the individual teeth, that's a quick route to really creepy-looking people.
    This, plus: the eyelids and lips cast shadows on the forms (eyeballs and teeth) beneath them. If you indicate that (for example, by using a thicker line weight where the shadows are), she'll start looking less like she's on an acid trip. JPEG attached.

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    @vineris that definitely explains why it always looked so creepy when I drew people with big grins. Thank you so much for the tip, it'll be really handy in the future!
    @Giacomo Gah! You're right! I should have used different densities to indicate where there are darker shadows and where the lines were lighter. I can't believe I didn't do that before. She definitely looks less creepy now. Your little paint-over thing was super helpful, thank you so much.
    I tried doing what you both suggested. Also realized that I accidentally erased a chunk of hair when redoing the shoulder width and made one eyebrow higher than the other. Oops! Tried fixing that. I think she looks much better now. Are there any other big problems with the sketch that I should fix before I start colouring? The colouring will be a horror in itself. I'll continue updating with the colouring, maybe you guys can help me out with that since i pretty much have no idea what I'm doing when it comes to colours. Even though I got my tablet quite a while ago, I`m still not as comfortable with digital art as I am with traditional art.
    But I digress! Here's the picture.
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    Nice updates; looking forward to the next installment!
    Have you decided what your light source + background will be yet? (*impatient*)
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    Gee, I wasn't really thinking about the background yet. It was just going to be a bust kind of floating there for practice, but I might actually put effort into the background since I could definitely work on that. I'm trying to keep it still recognizably Spirited Away, but it's hard to find a scene where the face would fit... I should have thought of this beforehand.
    So far I've had the flowers from this scene suggested: Spirited Away
    But I thought I might edit her pose a small bit and have this scene instead, but with her still smiling: Spirited Away
    Any thoughts? Preferences? Suggestions? I'd love to hear your opinions
    Edit:
    Scratch that last thought: edit her pose a WHOLE BUNCH and have the Haku scene instead. Below is a little preview of what it would look like with that scene instead. I didn't spend much time on it thus far, I just wanted to give you a taste of what it would look like with the latter scene instead of the former. I'm having trouble with the hands though...
    If you could point out any other anatomical flaws, that would just be the cat's pajamas. Your input would be lovely.
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    So right now I'm kind of delving into the realm of "what the hell am I doing."
    I've never attempted to colour a realistic picture digitally, and... Well, let's face it. Paint Tool Sai is not exactly the most professional program, haha. I've been tinkering away with Corel Painter Essentials, but I'm only just learning how to use the damn thing. I realize that this might not be the spot to ask for advice like this, and that I probably shouldn't have attempted a piece like this with my skill level, but do you guys have any tips for what to do next? Or any recommendations for free or very cheap art programs (although I know it's kind of a long shot, I know that the cheap programs tend to be pretty crap. But I'm kind of broke). I don't know if I should start colouring now or if I should do tones (which I don't know how to do, but I can look into that myself) or if I should put in the background before any of this.
    Sorry for my being so stupid. But advice would be great.
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    The reason I asked about the background originally is that what's in the scene/background will heavily influence the lighting if you're going for realism, because it affects the colours of the shadow, the reflected light, the ambient colour cast, that kind of thing. (The book Color and Light by James Gurney is the best for learning about this -- I think you'd like it. Lots of very pretty painted illustrations with explanations of what he was thinking when he did them. And dinosaurs. C: Pretty cheap, too.)

    So as for how to paint a thing realistically digitally... there are lots of ways to go about it, but given you've never attempted it before, I'd guess the easiest way (and the way best for learning) would be to lay the values in first. So just do it in grayscale first, and worry about the colour later.

    This way, you'll mostly thinking about the light and how to shade each form according to the light. This and this video might be helpful. (Ctrl+Paint is generally a pretty great resource.)

    btw I don't think it's stupid to try to push beyond your comfort zone. A little ambitious, and you should be aware that your first realistic painting might suck, but you can learn so much from this, especially with help from this forum.

    I haven't used either of those program, but from what I hear they should be plenty sufficient. The tools don't matter too much in painting -- good tools can make you faster, but only if you know how to use them. So long as the program has a brush tool and some way of blending or mixing colour, you're fine. (If you're worrying about software, you might want to stick to pencil for a while. Software won't make your pictures better. The principles of light and so on are the important thing, and once you learn those, you can make great stuff in any media.)

    It'd help if you could link to something you've done before, either digitally or in traditional media, so we can have a better understanding of what you already know and what kind of advice would be helpful.


    tl;dr - tones first yes, background probably don't worry for now.
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    You should think about what happens with the corners of a smiling mouth. And how the cheek is pushed up and out, and the lines that occur from that. In your first pic the lines doesn't match the ref pic, you have done two whereas the ref pic has only one, and closer to the corner of the mouth.

    In your second sketch the top lip looks too thick, and again the corner of the mouth doesn't quite read right.
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    @Lulie I feel like I've been recommended that book before. I should get on buying that. I'm sure this painting is going to look pretty cruddy, haha, but I'm determined to at least get it finished. I have a bad habit of giving up on paintings (traditional and digital) partway through. And also, I'm not trying to find software that will cover up my abilities, haha. Just better quality, although I'm sure I'll learn to use these just fine. I've just found that most people use Sai for manga and cartoons, but I'm sure it's plenty sufficient for realism as well. I'll be uploading some pictures to my sketchbook soon that show some studies I've been doing recently - unfortunately I don't have access to any paintings or coloured pieces of mine any more. The only time I have access to paints is at school as of now, although I am getting an easel next month to practice, so my teacher has all of my coloured pieces. Sorry to disappoint.
    @Devilry The reason the lines are like that in the first picture is because I was using a different reference at first, but then realized that it was for an older girl than I wanted and simply forgot to change them. D'oh! Thanks for pointing that out. I have no excuse for the second one, I'll definitely be changing that in my next update.
    Sorry I can't update too quickly, I've had a lot of dinky little English assignments floating around recently that I've left to the last minute to finish, haha. I'll try and update the picture soon, and get on uploading those pictures to my sketchbook.
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