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    !Hey!

    Anatomy study :
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    Bridgman ! ! :
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    Nude From life (8 - 1 min) :
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    Hey !

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    Arms study :
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    FROM LIFE (1 - 5 min)
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    PeteJ -----> Thanks you !!!

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    Bridgman !! The Torso :

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    Hands from life (really quick) :
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    Nude from life (8 -1 min) :
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    Personal project : Jack the Ripper ^^
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    Hey Concept Art !

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    Anatomy study !
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    Bridgman !
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    Quick Sketches :
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    Yo !

    New things :

    Quick wofl (1h, first try with charcoal) :
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    Pipe study (gouache) :
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    Landscape (pencil ~5h)
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    Nude from life (7 - 1 min):
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    drawing from life its really helping you awesome sketchbook alot of updates i dig that! your goauche its also pretty impressive keep doing those! good luck sir!

    my sketchbook! Drawing like a maniac!!

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    Destroy your weaknesses! theres nothing more to it! stop bitching grab that pencil and sketch Away!
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    LionheartGFX -----> Thanks a lot !^^ Yep, study from life help me !

    Bridgman study (classic) :
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    Head Study (Loomis) :
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    Nude from life (7 - 1 min)
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    Jack - Ink :
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    Plop !

    New things :

    Bridgman :
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    Arms study :
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    Modena(with copic) :
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    Old comic page (3 month ago...^^) :
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    Pirate, i will paint it with photoshop :
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    Yup !

    New things !!

    Indoor sketch (from life, it's my lounge)
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    Gesture training...
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    Comic page number 3 :
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    Hey CA !!!

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    Bridgman !
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    Some nude... really bad :
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    Clementine gouache (BAD !) :
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    Glass, pencil ...
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    Hello, Spideycreed !
    Great work, I can see all the anatomy studies you're doing really paying off in your other work. It's wonderful to see your full comics pages, as well. I studied this type of work myself. Creating comics fantastic, rewarding, and challenging work! You're abilies are really impressive, especially since you're only 16/17 years old! I think those who have worked with building sequential stories from the ground up can appreciate the complexities involved more-so than others... you know?

    If you don't mind critiques, I have some thoughts. One thing I remember being told in regards to visual story-telling, that I might pass on to you, is the advise: "Assume your audience is stupid." It sounds harsh, but let me explain: Really, what it means is that you cannot assume that your readers have all the information that you have, unless you draw it all out. And then, as the situation changes, re-tell them: with pictures.

    For example, I believe we're looking at pages 2 and 3 of the same comic story in Posts 99 & 100. Now, I understand that I don't have page 1 or 4, and those pages will have more information. But, taking that aside, in Panel 1 of Page 2, I see a foot getting grabbed by a hand (belongs to a horned creature?), but I do not know who the foot belongs to... and I don't see what happens to to that person. I also notice that there seems to be two men, one with the knives and one with a pony tail. I'm not sure where in space they are in relation to each other, because there is not a panel where you can see them both at the same time. Are they next to each other, across a battlefield from each other, or across the ocean from each other? If, say, the man with the knives has just run into the scene to save the guy with the pony tail, I think a long panel between the ax-throw and the knife-slash that establishes this guy arriving, and re-establishes where all the other players are in the scene would help the action flow more seamlessly... It's like, you can't take for granted that your audience is following every action .... who threw the ax? and why do I (as the reader) know that that hand belonged to that person? Maybe it'll all be cleared up in the text once the pages are lettered, or in the colors (like the color of the glove of the ax-throwing hand matches the color of the gloves with the guy with the knives), but a good rule of thumb to keep in mind is to try to sort out all those identifying continuity details in the pencils, if you can, so your story reads with or without lettering and colors. Additions of long shots (they don't have to be large, even) showing were all the characters are within the environment can help keep action scenes clear.

    Anyway, that's just some "food for thought." The work is fantastic and I really have enjoyed seeing it. Thanks for sharing!! (I hope I made sense, and that it translates well!)
    -angieb.

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    Angieb ------> Woow ! Thanks a lot for this great critic/advice, it's really helpful.
    First of all, the little sotry is : "the man with the knives has just run into the scene to save the guy with the pony tail". I'm sorry i don't have a great vocabulary, but i understand what you mean, and again, i really thank you for advice about the developpement of the story on the paper, and now i'll not hesitate to explain more, with more picture, for the comprehension of the story. Now i know : The plublic is brainless, and i have yo explain every actions and characters !

    I hope you will understand me, i'm sorry for my bad english... This large comment is precious, thanks !

    So, new stuff, not really good...

    Ugly portrait...
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    A quick sketch for a new idea : the blacksmith
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    The Color version of the Pirate :
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    Lots of great studies! love the Jack the Ripper drawing a lot. I certainly see a good bit of improvement since the first post. =)

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    Oh good! I worry I said too much! I'm just so excited to see comics work . I hope to get back to making some of my own soon... It is hard work! Can't wait to see what you do next!

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    Great studies. Espacialy your Superheros i like Keep it coming!

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    Staal Sander ----> Thanks !!!

    Angieb----> Thanks a lot, and it's not a problem, it's not to much. You said me lot of interesting things !!!

    Wormy----> Thank you !!

    News... i'm really sad because i can't draw many...

    Bridgman
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    Nude, (7- 1 min)
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    Torso study !
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    Landscape, from imagination !
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    Yup CA !

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    Bridgman ^^, the arm (very interesting !!)
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    Color version... i really don't like it :/
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    Nude, from life (7 -1 min)
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    Good work Bro' !

    KEEP IT UP AND WORK MOAR MOAR MOAR !!

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    Katsgod ===> Thanks a lot !!!

    Izzual ==> Ahah, thank youu bro'' !!

    New things :

    Anatomy study : The Legs (In blue = From memory)
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    A sketch of my bro', when he's working :
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    Nude from life (7-1 min)
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    WIP of the "Blacksmith"
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    The Blacksmith is going to be soooooo cool ;D

    Can't wait to see it finished Bro' !!

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    Really good studies, and I LOVE Jack the Ripper! As a woman though, I have a critique to make about the Pirate drawing: that pose is overused and anatomically incorrect, you don't need to show both boobs and butt to make a great female character! Keep up the good work

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    Izzual ---> Ahaha thanks, he's finish and you know it !^^

    QueenJulien---> Thank you ! I don't draw often female and i agree with you, i have some problems with it. I understand when you say the pose is overused, and yes i think there is something wrong in the anatomy, but what ? The legs ? The pelvis ? I konw there is something wrong but i don't find what is the problem.

    (Sorry for my bad english :s)

    New stuff :

    "The Blacksmith" finished ! (i will color it with photoshop)
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    Hehehehe I know that you're currently making a great painted version too ! ^^

    KEEP THE GREAT JOB UP BRO' !

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    Izzual ---->

    New stuff :

    Bad study, watercolor...
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    Bridgman, the arm !
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    The Blacksmith, clean/scan version :
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    The Blacksmith color WIP !
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    Yup' CA !

    New things :

    Some nude (6-1 min but mosly 3 and 1 min)
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    The Blacksmith, WIP 2 :
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    Hey Bro' you are working very hard that's really good ! I can't wait to see your blacksmith finished, you will progress very fast with your painted comics !

    KEEP IT UP !

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    Izzual ---> Thanks broooo' !

    New stuff :

    Bridgman, the arm !
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    Some nude from life ( between 6-1 min )
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    The Blacksmith color version, finish (i don't like the rendering)
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    Ezio sketch ! (I will do a lineart & color)
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    excellent art.. you are very good with all mediums... pen, pencil,..show us some digital stuff

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