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    Completely new take. Thoughts?

    Here are some of the changes suggested. Any thoughts?

    It is just roughed.

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    I think it still is too flat value- and saturation - wise. I like the cool colored light from above though. I think you probably should lose the heavy texture for now and better define the masses with light and shadow, and only then use the texture to reinforce the image.

    Hope it helps. Keep pushing!

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