Donalfall Aw thanks very much!! I appreciate the vote I really like your story and how it flows, and how you've shaded the backgrounds using different strokes, it seperates the panels really nicely.
ex-machina Thanks for your crit, nice little push. Your story is very interesting, I like the way you've conveyed the 'vision' guy. I was a little confused as to what was going on at first and had to read it a few times before I got it. For me, I think it would benefit having more of an explanation at the beginning to set the scene. But I like the neatness of your linework and the little details.
J.S.Sebastian Yeah! I really should have gone overboard with the colours but I didn't have too much time and just used layer effects which I've discovered don't show up too good on some monitors you live and learn.
Your comic has a great energy I liked the pacing but the story has a few gaps, like, what does the monochle do? and who's the bad guy and why did he capture those guys? It's a cool story regardless though and don't stop taking risks!
Kjesta You got my vote! I thought your story and execution of it was the most thought out and finished. You're very good at keeping your drawing consistent and the characters recognisable in each panel and as for the Beatles..they took just about everything as far as I know! Wouldn't recommend that lol
klortho Lol, great work man, really nice! I almost voted for you but I'm a sucker for a love story. This strip reminds me so much of Transmetropolitan, who are you influences?
Veldaria Definitely would have got my vote if it was finished love your characters and style
Angel Learned alot on this challenge but must learn more about sequential storytelling and practice drawing to a finished standard you lazy cow!