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January 17th, 2012 #1
Need sketchbook advice
Ok, so i am super nervous about uploading anything to here because there is crazy talented artists on here, but i really think i need some critiques to push me in the right direction. Here is some sketchbook stuff and a recent portrait study i did in photoshop, be as harsh as you want as long as it is constructive.
Last edited by will123will; November 1st, 2013 at 07:36 PM.
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Ok, so it won't let me post any images, not sure why.
January 17th, 2012 #3
Please upload smaller sized versions of these. It is near impossible to see.
January 17th, 2012 #4
trying now should be done soon
January 17th, 2012 #5
heres a smaller version of the portrait.
January 17th, 2012 #6
heres the smaller version of the sketchbook stuff
January 18th, 2012 #7
Heres a really quick still life I did and my first ever environment. Both really suck but just looking for any tips for improvement.
January 18th, 2012 #8
heres some studies of polar bears, studies of lower legs and forearms, and an old portrait drawing done in pencil.
January 18th, 2012 #9
my advice would be to work more on the basics.
The first portrait you posted has some anatomical problems, mainly the nose that it's too long.
The last portrait you showed looks better though.
Work a bit more on the values as well.
About the still life, work more on the edges and over all rendering. For example look at the cast shadow, you have rendered it all with hard edges. Cast shadows are usually hard when they're near the object and go progressively softer as they fall further away from the object.
Keep practicing! still lives have helped me a lot to learn more about painting.
January 18th, 2012 #10
hey thanks a lot, ye i could tell that nose was too long and thanks for the advice on the cast shadow.
January 18th, 2012 #11
Reworked on the still life a bit more, mostly on the edges of the shadows.
January 18th, 2012 #12
Ok so heres my second still life study, so annoying to paint but i do feel like I'm learning from painting them.
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Thank you for checking out my sketchbook
I'm far from an expert myself but on the last study you posted (the cup), where you putt the highlight is kinda wierd compared to the shadow.
The light appears to be coming from the frontright if you look at the highlights, but the castshadow is going to the front left. Should be going to back of your cup instead.
Also, your highlight is really bright compared to all the rest, there should be brighter tones of gray around the highlight. (ofcourse this could depend on the material the cup is made off).
I really like the second portrait btw.