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December 21st, 2011 #1
Need advice and critique
I'm trying to draw some fantasy and sci-fi art. Drawing for me is just a hobby, still I'd like to improve my skills and style.
Last edited by HochSpannung; December 4th, 2013 at 07:19 AM. Reason: sized-down the pics
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I like it it has a unique style to it. I would bring out the highlights more, to me it seems the tone you have the lightest is the mid-tone. Also uniting the background colors onto the dragon in the lighting will also marry the two together. You have nice and dark shadows on the body but no the face? You could bring those dark shadows into the face as his face is pointed toward the camera, from my understanding it would be darker looking at the background.
Hope this helps =)
December 21st, 2011 #3
your scalles look to much like a wireframe because they don't have shadingand there there flat and personnaly i don't really like the head looks a bit like a cat but then again that's personnall taste don't known what your intension was
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December 21st, 2011 #4
First and foremost, make your images smaller. My monitor is pretty big and yet even I had to scroll to look at them, which is not good.
The scales are not a problem at all actually. It's quite refreshing to see a more crocodillian skin on a dragon as opposed to the plates and fish-like scales you see around so much. You also varied them in size very well, and the feline head is obviously just a matter of taste. Most of the crits I have are on structure/proportion and the pose, as explained in my redlines. I actually need to hurry up and leave now so I hope it's clear and that you can read my handwriting, heh!
December 22nd, 2011 #5
Thanks for the scheme! It's clear what I should do. I'll post the pencil draft as soon as I have time.
Also I'd like to ask you what would be the optimal neck-to-body length ratio?
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December 22nd, 2011 #6
The perspective and the flow of the wings are awkward. Also, limit the amount of detailed scales. The scale of the farther wing shouldn't as detailed as the closest one.
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December 22nd, 2011 #7
December 23rd, 2011 #8
There isn't really a rule for that, although I wouldn't make the neck longer than the body length (minus the tail) myself. There are more things to consider than just length though; a very long neck will likely not be very thick, and the size of the neck will also largely determine how it is held by default. A long neck is often held much more upright than a short one. Again I'd advise you to look at birds (and dinosaurs) for reference.
January 7th, 2012 #9
Here's my take on fully-digital drawing. It's going to be a dragon perching on a telegraph pole.
Done with the pole and wires so far.
The first pic is a basic sketch, the second is the pole without the dragon.
January 7th, 2012 #10
The textures are very well done but the pole especially isn't very convincing. Why did you shade it towards the edges? There's no reason to do that, light is coming from all sides, if anything it should be lighter around the edges.
I'm also not too sure about that top side, I don't think we should be seeing so much of it considering that we're looking up at it.
January 7th, 2012 #11
I've looked up some more poles photos and it turns out I was wrong about the shading. The pole must be shaded much less and only towards it's right edge in my case so I'll redo that. As for the topside, I've seen some old poles with their tops sewn off in a manner of a very pointy roof so I've tried to imitate this.
I'd like to ask wether the wood texture is alright or should I rework it? Old wood is pretty challenging for me to imitate.
January 22nd, 2012 #12
Now I've another question. I've drawn a new sketch of Smaug basing it on your suggestions but I'm screwing up the wings. So I've decided to post this raw scetch before I screw it "beyond repair". How should the wings be drawn correctly if the viewpoint is positioned as in the second picture.
Sorry for the picture quality, I had to photograph it in order not to disband the staples fixing the sheets.
January 22nd, 2012 #13