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    Galaxy Note Sketch

    This is my first speedpaint girl use my new Galaxy Note (Samsung GT-N7000)
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    App: Sketchbook Mobile Express

    Wish you Like that !

    Crits and Feedbacks are alaways welcomed !

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    is this from a photo? if so put it up here aswell, if not get some reference. you might as well have done this in greyscale as you no reall attention to colour. the over all forms are fine but i think you would be better off taking more time learning the physics of light as they are very generalised here. also if you want to be serious about digital painting, i would suggest getting a tablet and photoshop or corel painter for your computer.

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    You should work more on the values. Right now it looks pretty flat, the light looks very blown out (I'm not sure if I'm expressing myself correctly..) ALthough it could be because you're copying a photo(?)

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    Girl

    Another speedpaint girl I have drawn with my mobile phone !

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    Use the critique given to you. You draw a lot of the very same-y stuff (pin-ups of mostly Asian women), and there doesn't really seem to be any sort of goal or actual progress in what you're doing. If you're not very serious about your craft, reconsider what you're doing here. If you are, start showing it.

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    hello? people have given up there time to try and offer some help, it would be nice if you took a second to acknowledge their existence. if you want to put up paintings willy-nilly whithout taking anything on board then i would suggest putting it up in another section of this site. and Crits and Feedbacks are not alaways welcomed, they are mandatory! im not sure if ive mentioned this before, but get photoshop!!! (or correl or something slightly more suited.)

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    So I guess you can draw passable pinups of Asian girls using your new phone. Big whoop.

    You don't seem to be taking any advice from us, so if you want asspats, go somewhere else. DeviantART, maybe?

    Where did it ever say that Humpty Dumpty was an egg?
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    Gift

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    Make a sketchbook. I'm not even going to bother critiquing you.

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    can some moderator please move this thread to the sketchbook forum, cause this guy is oblivious and not looking for any kind of critique. That way other people arnt going to waste there time trying to help, then maybe instead can give some people who are actually are willing to listen get the advice they deserve instead of peeps like him/her(probably him). thanks.

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    new picture

    Galaxy note 3 mins speedpaint; Welcome feedback and crits.

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    I'm beginning to think that you're a PR person for the Samsung (r) (tm) galaxy note (tm)(R).

    Other people have commented on the technical issues with your drawing, but I have an issue with your subject matter. Disregarding the objectification and gaze going on (not that those are minor issues of course) The guy who runs FZD school (http://www.youtube.com/user/FZDSCHOOL) has a rule of not allowing 1. sexy women and 2. big guns - they're just too easy. It's way too easy to make something "cool" by adding in some big guns or a half naked woman. I think it's time for you to step outside of your comfort zone if you want to improve.

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