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    Captain America

    Another superhero pose.

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    Here's my critique on my own art:

    His legs are short. Thighs look ok. The problem lies in the ankles. Lower leg needs to be longer. Feet could be bigger as well.

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    I think you need to study anatomy in general, it all looks off. And use a ref, that will make it that much better.

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    WIP done for now

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    I think you could've worked a bit more on the anatomy before calling it "finished". Overall I think he looks too stubby and his legs and feet need some serious redoing. For instance, his left knee should not be facing directly towards us.

    Hoping for more updates!

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    Sorry for the confusion... What I meant was WIP finished for now but still WIP. I will get back to it whenever I can. Thanks

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    Hope I fixed the problem.

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    Look again. The ellipses on Captain America's shield are not properly concentric.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pezz View Post
    Look again. The ellipses on Captain America's shield are not properly concentric.
    Yes right. That is easy fix.

    I'm trying to finish the anatomy fixes first.

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    WIP so far...

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    Ok so what happened?

    http://www.flickr.com/photos/5818986...57625682672267

    This piece is stunning, showing a very dynamic pose and foreshortening, and it is dated 2001. Yet ten years later you struggle with anatomy? I just had to ask, this had me bothering with your last piece as well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kauil View Post
    Ok so what happened?

    http://www.flickr.com/photos/5818986...57625682672267

    This piece is stunning, showing a very dynamic pose and foreshortening, and it is dated 2001. Yet ten years later you struggle with anatomy? I just had to ask, this had me bothering with your last piece as well.
    Well drawing isn't like riding a bike, you don't learn it and know it forever. A lot of that info is lost if you stop drawing for large amounts of time. But idk, Interested to hear this also.

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    Hmmm.



    Marvel Vs. Capcom fan?

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    FrogStar, Yes, I'm a fan of MVC series.

    The idea may not be original but I certainly did the drawings myself (my Captain America version).

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