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    A thousand deaths

    Added a character for each 10 deaths in Dark Souls.
    Used this image to study value based rendering, instead of my usual lineart and ink based approach.
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    Looking pretty good overall. However, the figure to the left of the central woman -- our left -- has a very tiny hand that's distracting. Also, composition-wise, I don't like the way the black iron armor guy on the bottom left is cut off so abruptly. It might be better to extend the canvas down a little and have him fade into the fog.
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    I'm a little bothered that they're still all pretty much the same size. You could easily kill some of that odd negative space around figures by making a few of them bigger.
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    Hand bigger, negative spaces filled (at least a bit) and made the woman a bit warmer. Figured i'd add the pygmy in the bottom as well.

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