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    My Animation Shorts

    Hi, my name is Leon. This is my first time posting my stuff on here. I like to do traditional 2d animation and here are my films.

    This is my second film since I started pursuing animation. It may seem like a slide show in the beginning, but it gets better so please just watch it all the way through.


    This is my third film and won
    Best in Show & Audience Choice Award Winner of
    4th Bi Annual RCC Animation Showcase 6/7/2011


    edit: i know i should have said this a while ago, but critiques/tips would be much appreciated. especially on the second one. thank you.

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    The fighting moves in the first video are really cool!

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    Quote Originally Posted by LukasA View Post
    The fighting moves in the first video are really cool!
    thanks!

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    very interesting stuff, really nicely done on those fighting parts, nice and pretty fluid motions!

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    here's a pencil test for short im currently working on.


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    oooh! spinny-roundy, very nice. Something I would suggest is maybe try having the rotation of his head start at the same time as the background scrolling. There are a few frames where the background "rotates" but the characters head maintains it's angle and in doing so the illusion of rotation is broken.

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    Bubblegum: Nice style, good direction, but felt unfinished.

    Wuxia: So far, there isn't anything that's distracting although I would also like to see this finished as well.

    Pan Pencil Test: Reminds me of Gerald Scarfe and Bruce Timm.

    Other things worth mentioning: While I did like your music choices, it would be advised to look into the Newgrounds Audio Portal or it's affiliate Symphony of Specters for music.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Smashed_Pumpkin View Post
    oooh! spinny-roundy, very nice. Something I would suggest is maybe try having the rotation of his head start at the same time as the background scrolling. There are a few frames where the background "rotates" but the characters head maintains it's angle and in doing so the illusion of rotation is broken.
    i see, thanks for the heads up!

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    Quote Originally Posted by FightingSeraph View Post
    Bubblegum: Nice style, good direction, but felt unfinished.

    Wuxia: So far, there isn't anything that's distracting although I would also like to see this finished as well.

    Pan Pencil Test: Reminds me of Gerald Scarfe and Bruce Timm.

    Other things worth mentioning: While I did like your music choices, it would be advised to look into the Newgrounds Audio Portal or it's affiliate Symphony of Specters for music.
    Thanks a bunch for your feedback and music tip! I feel more motivated now to actually finish these works!

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    really nice story and animation in the first one, loved it!

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    here's my latest animation, 'Satyr'



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    oh man, that was really nice! only little thing that i reacted to was the camera when he falls to the ground, it was just a little bit to synced, could maybe just be a little offsetted? and a shake or something when he bumps in the ground.

    im just amazed ´caus myself struggle to just draw 2 or more ppl interact, and you animate it really well

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    Quote Originally Posted by rumpenstiltzkin View Post
    oh man, that was really nice! only little thing that i reacted to was the camera when he falls to the ground, it was just a little bit to synced, could maybe just be a little offsetted? and a shake or something when he bumps in the ground.

    im just amazed ´caus myself struggle to just draw 2 or more ppl interact, and you animate it really well
    thank you sir! i will keep your suggestion in mind when i get to refining that part.

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    I definitely look forward to seeing Satyr's completion. By the way, here's some voice actor suggestions for future films:
    Crystal-Jawz
    Box-Killa
    Brian Beaubien (Psyguy)
    John Creasman (Xalkie)
    Druox the Shredder
    Larry McKee (Malamite Ltd.)
    Chris Zito
    Snowfender
    Josh Miller (D3vilsheep)
    GuitarmasterX7

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    Quote Originally Posted by FightingSeraph View Post
    I definitely look forward to seeing Satyr's completion. By the way, here's some voice actor suggestions for future films:
    Crystal-Jawz
    Box-Killa
    Brian Beaubien (Psyguy)
    John Creasman (Xalkie)
    Druox the Shredder
    Larry McKee (Malamite Ltd.)
    Chris Zito
    Snowfender
    Josh Miller (D3vilsheep)
    GuitarmasterX7
    thanks a bunch! you've been very helpful! sorry for the late reply

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