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Thread: My Animation Shorts
November 17th, 2011 #1
My Animation Shorts
Hi, my name is Leon. This is my first time posting my stuff on here. I like to do traditional 2d animation and here are my films.
This is my second film since I started pursuing animation. It may seem like a slide show in the beginning, but it gets better so please just watch it all the way through.
This is my third film and won
Best in Show & Audience Choice Award Winner of
4th Bi Annual RCC Animation Showcase 6/7/2011
edit: i know i should have said this a while ago, but critiques/tips would be much appreciated. especially on the second one. thank you.
Last edited by jamjiggalam; December 13th, 2011 at 02:59 AM.
November 17th, 2011 #2Registered User
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The fighting moves in the first video are really cool!
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May 10th, 2012 #5
here's a pencil test for short im currently working on.
May 11th, 2012 #6
oooh! spinny-roundy, very nice. Something I would suggest is maybe try having the rotation of his head start at the same time as the background scrolling. There are a few frames where the background "rotates" but the characters head maintains it's angle and in doing so the illusion of rotation is broken.
May 14th, 2012 #7
May 13th, 2012 #8
Bubblegum: Nice style, good direction, but felt unfinished.
Wuxia: So far, there isn't anything that's distracting although I would also like to see this finished as well.
Pan Pencil Test: Reminds me of Gerald Scarfe and Bruce Timm.
Other things worth mentioning: While I did like your music choices, it would be advised to look into the Newgrounds Audio Portal or it's affiliate Symphony of Specters for music.
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May 14th, 2012 #9
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really nice story and animation in the first one, loved it!
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June 9th, 2012 #11
here's my latest animation, 'Satyr'
Last edited by jamjiggalam; June 9th, 2012 at 04:03 AM.
June 9th, 2012 #12
oh man, that was really nice! only little thing that i reacted to was the camera when he falls to the ground, it was just a little bit to synced, could maybe just be a little offsetted? and a shake or something when he bumps in the ground.
im just amazed ´caus myself struggle to just draw 2 or more ppl interact, and you animate it really well
June 10th, 2012 #13