Page 16 of 35 FirstFirst ... 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 ... LastLast
Results 226 to 240 of 522
  1. #226
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    Amerstburg, Ontario
    Posts
    1,070
    Thanks
    7
    Thanked 429 Times in 415 Posts
    Damn dude those armour studies are so tasty...awesome work all around, you're improving at a tremendous rate!


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #227
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Connecticut
    Posts
    430
    Thanks
    128
    Thanked 67 Times in 64 Posts
    @Psychbudd :] thanks.

    Little flesh out of one of the concepts, will probably flesh out 1 or 2 more, mix and match, see what looks good. Look at the pose some more, yada yada.
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Available for Freelance -Portfolio| Sketchbook |DeviantArt |Blog |ZesiulArt@Gmail.com

  4. #228
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Connecticut
    Posts
    430
    Thanks
    128
    Thanked 67 Times in 64 Posts
    Another idea for her, I like this one more. Some studies to come! Work and school has been insainly busy this past weekend. But I'm still gonna keep going!!!
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Available for Freelance -Portfolio| Sketchbook |DeviantArt |Blog |ZesiulArt@Gmail.com

  5. #229
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Connecticut
    Posts
    430
    Thanks
    128
    Thanked 67 Times in 64 Posts
    Trifling around, wish I could find more armor reference! Oh well, do what you can with what cha have.

    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Available for Freelance -Portfolio| Sketchbook |DeviantArt |Blog |ZesiulArt@Gmail.com

  6. #230
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Connecticut
    Posts
    430
    Thanks
    128
    Thanked 67 Times in 64 Posts
    A few more things I sketched up but didn't go with. Also been up to a bunch of more metal studies, but I an't postin those cause those, while there were quite a few, they weren't something I'd be postin.
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve

    And here is my final layout, work in progress of course.
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve

    Ultra busy at work and finals week in school so this is the first post in awhile, and probably the last for a tad too. But lets play it by ear.
    Last edited by Zesiul; September 26th, 2012 at 10:36 PM.
    Available for Freelance -Portfolio| Sketchbook |DeviantArt |Blog |ZesiulArt@Gmail.com

  7. #231
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Location
    WI, Milwaukee area
    Posts
    263
    Thanks
    152
    Thanked 117 Times in 96 Posts
    Holy shoes, I love those figures at the top of the page! How they get pulled back and forth in space and have this creamy smooth dimensionality - awesome. The Majora picture is also great! And the posing for that final in your most recent post is awesome--dynamic without being obnoxious about it.
    Good to see you using that Cesar for all he's worth, too.

    No crits from me - great work, keep it up!
    My sketchbook - come critique me!
    jesse martel@tumblr

  8. The Following User Says Thank You to JesseM For This Useful Post:


  9. #232
    Join Date
    Aug 2012
    Location
    London, UK
    Posts
    84
    Thanks
    16
    Thanked 24 Times in 24 Posts
    Why leave out the nipples?... it... just... doesn't... make sense
    But in all seriousness I really like your work
    Would like to see some more portraits!

  10. The Following User Says Thank You to CR Faerber For This Useful Post:


  11. #233
    Join Date
    Apr 2010
    Location
    Varna,Bulgaria
    Posts
    781
    Thanks
    36
    Thanked 162 Times in 146 Posts
    Beautiful stuff , man...beautiful stuff.
    I am Othrandir and Othrandir means me.

    E-MAIL : NICKOLAYORDANOV@GMAIL.COM

    PORTFOLIO

    Twitter

    Tumblr

    DA

    Sketchbook

  12. The Following User Says Thank You to Othrandir For This Useful Post:


  13. #234
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Connecticut
    Posts
    430
    Thanks
    128
    Thanked 67 Times in 64 Posts
    @JesseM I'm glad you like it.
    @CR Faerber I wasn't sure if I wanted her to have a top on. I went through a few tops but I wasn't happy with them. Right now they're there though. And thanks.
    @Rastaray Thanks

    So I brought this one a bit further. I'm unhappy with the background/face/hands and am probably going to study those things and then come back with a plan. Instead of spending a few more hours doodling on top of this I'll probably just restart the same piece.

    I could use critiques at this point if you have any.

    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Available for Freelance -Portfolio| Sketchbook |DeviantArt |Blog |ZesiulArt@Gmail.com

  14. #235
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Location
    NW Washington
    Posts
    52
    Thanks
    10
    Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
    I'm so jealous of your ability to pose and do figures and whatnot! D:

    Not much of a critique, more of an observation: the lower half of her right leg/foot/ankle looks a little askew. May just be me. In general, her feet are angled in a position that makes it look rather uncomfortable. Everything else is fantastic, though. Your shading and light is immaculate.

  15. The Following User Says Thank You to Pyre For This Useful Post:


  16. #236
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Connecticut
    Posts
    430
    Thanks
    128
    Thanked 67 Times in 64 Posts
    @Pyre Thanks. I was bothered by the foot too, and thats what most people pointed out.

    So here is a quick sketch of fixes and changes I've made. I wanted to change the lighting to maybe a moonlit scene. Going back to my original sketch's mood. I'm still messing around with the armor and design. I like the pose a lot more though. Even if it is seemingly similar, look again ;]

    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Available for Freelance -Portfolio| Sketchbook |DeviantArt |Blog |ZesiulArt@Gmail.com

  17. #237
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Connecticut
    Posts
    430
    Thanks
    128
    Thanked 67 Times in 64 Posts
    Here we gooooooo!

    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve

    Reworked pose, changed the bg colors so they were more cold than warm (Which made no sense) and she's currently pretty desaturated, almost to a dull grey. I'll rework that in a bit. Now I'm doing design.

    Design ideas 1-6, all just quick doodles overtop but they get the point across. Hmmm which one to go with.

    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Available for Freelance -Portfolio| Sketchbook |DeviantArt |Blog |ZesiulArt@Gmail.com

  18. #238
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Connecticut
    Posts
    430
    Thanks
    128
    Thanked 67 Times in 64 Posts
    So I bet you've found yourself asking "Where is Zesiul" or "how come Zesiul hasn't been posting?" Well theres a very long explanation to that, but lets just say it was a perfect storm of procrastination and laziness. Whatever the case I'm here right now to post. And give a slight update. WOO. Now first I'll say I've spent way too damn long on this warrior in the woods piece. So I'm putting my foot down. I'll deal out no more new ones, this IS 100% the final piece, just have to sort it out. No more running to a redo.

    Second, I've been gone but I've not been out! I've gotten a great book that has really made me enjoy pencil drawing again. And helped me with understanding how to draw whats in front of me. So with todays post I'll show you some pencils!

    So here it is! The first post in almost a month!

    HERE is the final start for my warrior in the woods.
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Here is something I painted a month ago right after the last pos but never ended up posting.
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Here are some face studies.
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    And here are the pencil pieces! Woo!
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve

    Heres to more posts and a fuck ton more improvement!
    Available for Freelance -Portfolio| Sketchbook |DeviantArt |Blog |ZesiulArt@Gmail.com

  19. #239
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Connecticut
    Posts
    430
    Thanks
    128
    Thanked 67 Times in 64 Posts
    Another update on this one. I added a grander background. Hmm, we'll see where I take it tomorrow.
    Zesiul's Sketchbook: Improve
    Available for Freelance -Portfolio| Sketchbook |DeviantArt |Blog |ZesiulArt@Gmail.com

  20. #240
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Posts
    407
    Thanks
    81
    Thanked 124 Times in 120 Posts
    You seem to really enjoy character work and it shows, those are looking great! You might want to play with some lost edges in the last piece as she kind of looks cut out and pasted on, just try some soft edges around the feet maybe?
    DeviantART // My Sketchbook
    If you have the time please show me some love and +watch or come by and check out my progress and crit me!

  21. The Following User Says Thank You to Jaik For This Useful Post:


Page 16 of 35 FirstFirst ... 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 ... LastLast

Similar Threads

  1. SketchBook: New sketchbook to improve
    By Raiderukkus in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 37
    Last Post: February 20th, 2013, 09:30 AM
  2. Replies: 10
    Last Post: October 25th, 2010, 05:25 AM
  3. SketchBook: Sketchbook - trying improve it all...
    By artbyahm in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: May 9th, 2010, 07:28 AM
  4. SketchBook: I need to improve. HELP! sketchbook
    By Maui in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: October 4th, 2009, 05:56 AM
  5. SketchBook: My Sketchbook... Please help me improve.
    By riegera in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 19
    Last Post: March 19th, 2008, 06:15 PM

Members who have read this thread: 0

There are no members to list at the moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Developed Actively by vBSocial.com