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    Marie Antoinette

    Using movie reference from Sofia Coppola Marie Antoinette and photo reference for the macaron.

    what do you think can be better ?


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    your contrasts are very low, but most importantly, each of your pieces seems disconnected from each other, they have their own light strength, ambiance and direction.... which is why you should have been referencing rather the reproducing

    The background also helps in flattening the final result and make it look even more like a collage.

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    Nice facial expression! I agree that the elements do like sorta awkward and pasted on rather than integrated. You could possibly mitigate this issue by spreading some of the macaroon color and the figure colors throughout the background? Don't drop the monochrome, just sorta smuggle those purples and whites in.
    Please Sir, I'd like some more.

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    made some changes, what do you think ?

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    The inclusion of the gold and darker pinks, help but it still feels disjointed still. maybe make the top and bottom pieces into a whole border?

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    great idea !!! thanks

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