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    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Hello Conceptart.org I haven't been around here in a while. Allot of things have changed for me throughout this passage of time. I guess thats why I've decided to move on from my old sketchbook. Allot of the work I was doing doesn't represent me as a person anymore and I feel that there was a looming of negativity for me left in my old thread (The negativeity I'm speaking of has nothing to do with the users of CA. It's more of something that me and a few others would understand). Anyways I hope that this new thread is a fresh start and that my art will improve !!!!

    First off some of my 2D works I've done recently:

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Next is some of my 3d work done in zbrush:

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    I hope that you guys enjoy my works ^_^ !
    Last edited by vayne108; March 25th, 2014 at 06:08 PM.
    Critiques on my work always welcome!!

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    I like your color schemes. I like mythological creatures that are beautiful to look at, instead of undead all the time! I don't know anything about z-brush but I like the textures of the wood and dried earth. Good luck on the new SB! Off to a good start!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Theodor View Post
    I like your color schemes. I like mythological creatures that are beautiful to look at, instead of undead all the time! I don't know anything about z-brush but I like the textures of the wood and dried earth. Good luck on the new SB! Off to a good start!
    Thanks, and I very much think that undead things are gross and horrid and I prefer to avoid that. While, I hope it does get a good start thanks ^_^ !
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    Your creatures are beautiful, innocent and peaceful looking. Love it... Keep it up!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dawood Marion View Post
    Your creatures are beautiful, innocent and peaceful looking. Love it... Keep it up!!
    Thanks, I will try by best.
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    I like your creatures; nice and friendly cartoony style, it has potential.
    Try and work with bolder shadows and more color contrast with the background.
    I think you've done that best with the black/white parrot griffon thingy.
    But with the fox for example, the light on his back comes from another direction than the light on his tail. It's hard to get that right, so all I can say is practice !
    "...it had the serene look in it's eyes of a creature that realizes it's a tube on legs..." ~ Terry Pratchett

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    Quote Originally Posted by Harmageddon View Post
    I like your creatures; nice and friendly cartoony style, it has potential.
    Try and work with bolder shadows and more color contrast with the background.
    I think you've done that best with the black/white parrot griffon thingy.
    But with the fox for example, the light on his back comes from another direction than the light on his tail. It's hard to get that right, so all I can say is practice !
    YaY, practice ! thats no problem. Besides what you mentioned i think I need more practice on human faces.
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    Wow some really really great stuff, very nice drawings indeed and that 3d is fantastic, keep workin' hard!
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    Quote Originally Posted by AlexTooth View Post
    Wow some really really great stuff, very nice drawings indeed and that 3d is fantastic, keep workin' hard!
    Thanks, I will !
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    Here, my updates for today. I should really update way more often...... Anyways I hope you guys enjoy !

    #1: Sketch dump: some random drawing at the bottom, that I drew when watch a documentary on helvetica in class. and the others are life drawings and gestures from the saturday drawing clinic at my college.

    Seee....... last image...........for pic.

    #2: A WIP of my characters: This is WIP (Work in progress) piece of my OCs Silva and her hawk Ivan they are planning routes for Silva's next job. She had a tough night the night before on another job she is very tired and a little cranky.

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)

    #3: Owl of the Wood: My finished version of the 3d piece that I posted earlier in my sketchbook.

    Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: March, 25, 2014)
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    very nice colours for the paintings! 3D creatures really well scuplted!! Thanks for sharing!
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    Quote Originally Posted by krypt View Post
    very nice colours for the paintings! 3D creatures really well scuplted!! Thanks for sharing!
    Thank you and your welcome !!
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    Woah those 3D drawings are seriously good! Keep going and well done
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