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    Lightbulb Hand Walker WIP.

    Hi, i need some comments about the creature, anything you want, also ideas for the waist area, because i don´t wanna to make it "a torso". Still haven´t tackled some areas, but any comments or ideas will be very welcome.



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    Hey Cyber,

    I think your creature is laid out in an interesting, imaginative way. Much of the detail, however, reads as bad anatomy. I realize that you're not going for a human character, but, for instance, the "shoulders" on the smaller set of limbs have the form of deltoids, but the anatomy is off.

    Also, a lot of the detail reads flat because it doesn't follow around the curves of the masses (this is especially distracting in the dangling-stomache-like form.)

    Giving your piece the squint test, it looks like you can really push the values more to define the form.

    There is something especially unsatisfying about the single tooth that seems to be stuck on the outside of the creature's lip.

    The face in general doesn't have a very believable underlying anatomy

    For my taste, I would distort the forms away from familiar human shapes (what if the smaller limbs sprouted directly from the bottom of the stomache area, for instance...what if the neck was much longer and snakelike? That sort've thing.)

    Just my opinions...hope they help.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DPFX View Post
    Hey Cyber,

    I think your creature is laid out in an interesting, imaginative way. Much of the detail, however, reads as bad anatomy. I realize that you're not going for a human character, but, for instance, the "shoulders" on the smaller set of limbs have the form of deltoids, but the anatomy is off.

    Also, a lot of the detail reads flat because it doesn't follow around the curves of the masses (this is especially distracting in the dangling-stomache-like form.)

    Giving your piece the squint test, it looks like you can really push the values more to define the form.

    There is something especially unsatisfying about the single tooth that seems to be stuck on the outside of the creature's lip.

    The face in general doesn't have a very believable underlying anatomy

    For my taste, I would distort the forms away from familiar human shapes (what if the smaller limbs sprouted directly from the bottom of the stomache area, for instance...what if the neck was much longer and snakelike? That sort've thing.)

    Just my opinions...hope they help.
    All helps, as i said i need to tackle some areas. Your help is very appreciated.

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