I am struggling with this. The story is basically the story of Hansel & Gretel but the gingerbread house is made of rock candy and is in a cave. The witch character put candy all over the place to lure kids to her lair. I still have to flesh out the house.
I would like to hear peoples initial reactions. Is it interesting? what do you want to see more of? is it a good enough start to spend 8hrs finishing it up? or any other comments you might have.