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    @ ForScience, thanks again for the feedback! I'm trying to gain confidence through studies to apply. And you're right, I should incorporate imagination designs and drawings more often.

    @ lionheartGFX, Thank you!! I was wondering what the next step in gestures was and you gave me a wonderful suggestion. I started with some body language drawings from observation (from an Asian drama) since I don't have enough knowledge to draw them from imagination. I don't think I got the exercise quite right yet, hopefully with more practice I'll start seeing the subtleties of human gestures.

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    Edited that imagination pose

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    From studies to imagination you are going greatly!!! Awesome improvement. Now just keep up the great work

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    I want to share a tip about lighting. When light breaks across a curved form like the human body it creates a soft line (called a core shadow). When a shadow falls onto an object, it creates a hard edge (called a cast shadow). I did a quick paint over showing how this applies to your drawing.

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    @ kingkostas, Thank you!

    @ ForScience, indeed it does! I'm starting to understand how light work with object studies and I definitely agree with what you say (still it's very very complicated). Using cast shadow and core shadow fleshes her out. Also thanks for the definitions! I didn't really know the difference. Here is one more form study (still life), this one was harder than usual because the box was black and I couldn't really tell what the result color (from lighting) was...I focused on hard and soft edges (or maybe there aren't many soft edges in this study, mmmm mostly cast shadows)...gaaaah tis all confusing.


    ps: Perspective is not very good, I see it now

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    I took a photo after I finished the painting and here are my thoughts

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    1. in real life, the perspective is not that extreme. It is much more subtle, to the point that I didn't even see it.
    2. The colors are off in the picture, the red cylinder thing is more saturated and red-red not orange-red.
    3. the top surface is lighter in value than the other two, but it is not so bright like in the picture...it's a tad darker...or better to say, less reflective


    bottom line, I need more practice




    pps: I will be traveling for the next couple of days
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    the core shadow thing is how an object reacts to a single light source, in this case you have at least 2 sources of light competing for the role of primary light source. The same rules apply, just twice.
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    I see! I tried to recreate the experiment again with a more defined second light (spot light). Still life

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    Body language/tone studies
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    head construction form imagination after watching one of Vilppu's DVD
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    part imagination, part observations. Sorry for the poor quality, scanner not available. Photos taken with phone.
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    The gesture work is really helping your figures e-nat do them more and thanks for sharing.

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    Thank you Yemi!


    I don't like this speedy much, too amateurish.
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    After having just gone through your whole sketchbook, I must say you have AMAZING improvement! I love your gestures and line drawings. Keep up the great work [:

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    Thank you for the wonderful comment gabyness! I hope the improvement continues

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    wow alot of stuffs! great work with the body language, try to exxaggerate even more, i see you go exactly with the reference, remember reference its never used to exactly copy you can (and to me MUST) change it to your liking, for an example in the scared drawing, fi you would have pushed the hands furhter to the phaes raised the eyebrows and opened more the eyes it would have showned alot more emotion and action.

    this doesnt mean that you did bad im just saying how you could improve those, facial expression and body language its a tricky subject for beginners and intermediates because you are struggling with both how to draw the body and face ACCURATELY plus using it EFFECTIVELY.

    so for starters why dont you try to reff some disney production art, they show alot of body language and facial expression, if you decide to take my suggestion try and push YOUR drawings and exaggerate them even more than the disney originals its a tough call but im sure you will learn alot, ALSO when doing something that requires an specific emotion or pose try to do it yourself and feel it.

    im gonna stop rambling you can go to living lines library to see some disney production art, i recommend tarzan and tangled http://livlily.blogspot.mx/2010/11/m...-drawings.html

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    Thank you for the awesome critique!! You're right, I recently started to break away from copying the ref but I often fall back into old habits. I tried different versions of that scared pose again, no breakthroughs yet but it feels less stiff.

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    and more goodies, that link is amazing! Thank you. I started with Tarzan, there are also construction sketches and expression break-downs. Really awesome stuff. (as for trying to push the expression more than Disney, that's gonna need more practice but I'm up for it)

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    More Tarzan/ body language/ expression studies

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    Really inspiring improvement, your drawings are great but way ahead of your rendering, maybe you could try some material studies, skin, metal...

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