I want to work on this one and get it to a proper finished point.
going to keep top post updated with progress so double post, just to keep the progress images.
dude, your drawing a summoned tentacle monster, give it SPACE! go all out, high contrast, freaky designs, play with perspective, current version is bloody boring.
yeah i see, i originally made to take more of the page and flow better; but i wanted to make sure it fitted into the narrative i was looking for. Secret religion worshiping these summoned creatures.
Ill work on giving it more space to move, also get it to interact with the building.
Hey Frog, I like the idea behind the piece. I would encourage you, even in the initial sketchy stages, to really define strong values. It will help clarify for you and your viewers where the boundaries of the piece lay. That's part of the reason why Bette's paint over pops the piece out so nicely. Keep it up!
Maybe the moster should be in the middle of the page to emphasise that the people are worshipping it. I think you should pay alot of attention to the temple design rather than the creature design.