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    Red face Hotelier Promotional Advert

    This is an advertisement I just finished, so what do you think of the design. as you can see the theme states who we serve, so do you like the way I have graphically represented the images.

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    There's a typo, should be "Restaurants"

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    Not seeing anything relevant to photography.

    "Everything must serve the idea. The means used to convey the idea should be the simplest and clear. Just what is required. No extra images. To me this is a universal principle of art. Saying as much as possible with a minimum of means."
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    Quote Originally Posted by Devinda87 View Post
    This is an advertisement I just finished, so what do you think of the design. as you can see the theme states who we serve, so do you like the way I have graphically represented the images.
    I would suggest as first to correct the word "Resturents" to "Reastaurants". I think the photos are fine but the header is too much squezeed.

    Make more air here. Maybe it would look better to use bigger font on header so that it would be more visible. Resize a bit all that central point (photos) so that layout could breath more.

    Also if I may put another suggestion put some descruiption and general inromation on the bottom (footer). If you resize that centra point as I mentioned and resize the header complete concept would look better.

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    Agree with the others.. as well as you have an artifact from the top picture left on the one under.. (the two circles by the word hotel) fix the spelling errors.. and I would also as one person said make the header larger, thats the brand and what you are marketing, make it stand out. I would also add that I would lose the effect/inner shadow thing you got going on around the edges.. makes the whole thing look amauterish to me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ajacoub View Post
    I would suggest as first to correct the word "Resturents" to "Reastaurants". I think the photos are fine but the header is too much squezeed.

    Make more air here. Maybe it would look better to use bigger font on header so that it would be more visible. Resize a bit all that central point (photos) so that layout could breath more.

    Also if I may put another suggestion put some descruiption and general inromation on the bottom (footer). If you resize that centra point as I mentioned and resize the header complete concept would look better.
    thanx for your feed back, the header is the brand & logo & it has been initially decided before this design. maybe if I increased it's size maybe better prominence might get into it.

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