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Thread: Another critique
August 9th, 2011 #1
Since i'm receiving realy great critiques on my work, i decide to post this one, that my friends love and I made this one some months ago.. Is another piece of fanart, Piper from Storm Hawks and i wasnt trying to realism.
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or at least... update some thread with fixed work....
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It has nothing to do with snobbishness, it is just that you need to stop thinking about "fixing whats wrong" but realize the meaning and complexity of the term "study anatomy". Reading a book, I am afraid, doesn't even cover one percent of it.
August 9th, 2011 #9
Nezumi's comment about you drawing with shapes instead of volumes is in effect in this one too.
Her neck is way too front (probably caused by you copying the crappy style of Storm Hawks without understanding enough of human anatomy to avoid the mistakes despite changing the style) and seems to be sticking in uncomfortable angle, especially because the gem is supposed to be in the middle of her collar making the neck look more twisted than you meant.
Her nose seems to be misaligned with her mouth and her eyes seem to be looking at nothingness, past the viewer.
Her hair fringe is close creating a tangent with her neck and the same fringe of hair doesn't seem to be connected naturally and looks more like it's growing out of the other piece of hair. Considering her front hair, the back of her hair might've benefited if it was kept closer to the original stylized shape since the front hair have kept the original stylized look. Also none of the back hair seem to conform to the perspective/view the rest of her head is in, making the hair look like it's growing vaguely sideways.
The shading in the neck is sloppy, doesn't work to make the neck look three-dimensional, and looks out of place as the whole face is missing same shading.
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Thank you. That what i want to read ^-^
ok i'm off to my studies now. Thankx everyone, i learned more here than on 4 years on DA.
August 9th, 2011 #12
quando eu disse corrigir os trabalhos antigos, quiz dizer para refazeres os trabalhos, atentando aos erros...
tive muita dificuldade em fazer isso, e sei que é bem difícil, pois me desanima redesenhar o que eu já fiz, mas fazendo isso, eu evolui mais rápido
se precisares de ajuda am algo mais específico, pode me enviar mensagem