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August 6th, 2011 #1
New sketchbook for progress
Hi everyone! I am new in concept art and wanted some feedback bout my work, I will keep updating this thread with my new works from time to time
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Very nice; I really dig the style and use of color. For a crit, I think the weakest areas of the first image are the hands and feet; it looks to me like you weren't really sure what to do with them. They're better in the last image, but I think they're still lacking compared to the rest of the figure. Keep up the good work!
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August 6th, 2011 #3
thanks for the input , yeah I get a little confused while drawing the hand and feet.. been practicing hands lately and I am starting to get the hang of how the hand and feet should be drawn like.
August 6th, 2011 #4
What a cute style you have going! I like the warm colours and the expressions. ^_^ It may be stylized, but it's a fun one that makes for plenty of possible stories and unique characters.
Besides the hands and feet, I'll also caution you to be careful how you draw limbs, like the legs. For instance, in the first picture, I'm not sure if she's pulling on her pantyhose or what, but her left leg looks more like a cylinder; her right looks like a cute stylized leg. You want to make sure that what you're doing is still consistently thought out in the entire drawing. Also, make sure you understand what body parts are hidden and how (e.g.: one leg's position hidden behind another), as well as the ones that we can see. That way, you'll have more control over what you're trying to do. Never hurts to draw out the full body as a simple sketch, just to see for yourself (unless you've done that but didn't show it here. In that case, ignore my last advice.)
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August 6th, 2011 #5
thank you so much for the input, I will remember bout how I draw the limbs from now on I never thought of making the full figure before and then erasing the overlapping lines... thank you for the great advice jazz
August 6th, 2011 #6
I'm always psyched to see more cartooning on CA! You've already gotten some advice along the lines I would of suggested so I'll just say your stuff is super cute and stick with that.
My favorite thing so far is the rosy elbow and knee in the first post. It's a great little touch that I think deserves to be pointed out.
Happy sketching! post more soon!
August 6th, 2011 #7
thank you so much Rhubix I will post my new works soon...
August 7th, 2011 #8
doodles and stuff
some doodles and 10 min and 2 min drawings done from observation, will post more soon... sorry for the bad quality of the pics they are taken from my mobile camera as I don't have a scanner at the moment
August 7th, 2011 #9
August 8th, 2011 #10
Hey, thanks for stopping by.
Good start for your sb. The colors are vibrant and nice. Remember to work out the basics of anatomy too along with the figure drawing. I know it's an awful ca.org cliché to suggest Loomis and Bridgman, but I'm doing that anyways. I think you should check out Vilppu too
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August 10th, 2011 #11
August 14th, 2011 #12
octo alien girl
Done a new painting yesterday... I am in a very unfamiliar environment and it effects my work a little but still pouring down sketches in my sketchbook.. I get frustrated if I am not able to draw something will update again when I get back home to my scanner..
September 6th, 2011 #13
Have you ever been asked to do a children's story or playboy cartoons?, your style and sense of color is killer man, if i can critique I'd say start making stories with that style
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September 19th, 2011 #15
So I have been away a long time mainly cause of my internet connection, I have been studying Charles Bargue drawings and I have realized that I really don't know how to draw hands, So I am gonna practice hands more from now on, I have not drawn hands in my recent sketches and I am sorry for that. Will post some more sketches soon.
September 19th, 2011 #16
Nice style, but there's nothing else for me to comment other than show us more.
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September 19th, 2011 #18
Sadly, all that should have been said, have been said.. so great stuff you got there.. (again XD)
And yes of course, I would like to see more of you (same kind of comment again )
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