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    Kharnaghe's Sketchbook

    Since I got a name change I'm posting my new stuff here. First off is a value study.

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    Nice start to your new sketchbook c: For future value studies, it would be useful to post the reference next to your painting, so that people can give better crit. Without the ref pic I can't give a detailed crit but here are some things that I noticed about your values. (Value study right c: )
    1. The values could have better contrast. The eyes and hair are dark enough, but the skin looks washed out due to having no prominent lights or darks. Usually there are tiny bits of dark in the sharp edges
    2. The hair strands look off, it might have been better if you had done them in a more subdued grey, right now they look like the kid has early grey hair. Drawing hair as a rough structure rather than a collection of strands will also help. If you are drawing individual strands of hair make sure to use a very tiny brush
    Hope I helped ^_^
    Hey you! Yes, you! Crit me!

    My Sketchbook 1 Last page Bashing much needed and appreciated!
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    Feel free to shoot me a pm anytime~

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