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    Woman Fencer

    character concept sketch.

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    -I like it!

    Don't be too discouraged that you haven't received many replies in this forum. The majority of posts here don't receive over 10 replies and there tends to be some nice artwork that slips through the cracks.

    Good use of saturated color throughout, it makes the image jump out. Also, I like what you did with designing the costume, sort of a futuristic take on current fencing gear.

    Keep making more art! I'd like to see how things develop.

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    Wow, nice image. All she needed was a lightsabre foil and it would have been really cool ^_^

    Suggestions I could give: Define your lines a little more by selecting a smaller brush in whatever paint program you're using. Right now, the image looks like it is being viewed by someone who needs glasses, but isn't using them. A little fuzzy, in other words. Still really good, though.
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    yeah baby, crickets, that's what happens nowadays soo many artists online it'd take all our free time to critique everyone! i like the attitude of the character, i think there needs to be just a little cleaner lines to define the shapes.
    those shoulder pads are cool

    i like the spotlights going down into the distance idea but i think you need to angle them off to the side so we can get a better view of them, slant the two back ones a little more left to compliment the angle of the sheath
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    Davey Jones, KingOfChaos, wallychairmover
    thank you, thank you very much all for your comments, crits and advices.

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    Don't have anything else to add so I'll just say "Nice work."
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    I like this, the way the blue from the floor bounces back up, and the strength of color. The head is alittle too small and neck too long also some bits would'nt get light either from the spotlight or the bounce from the floor so thse should be black. Here's a quick cut,n,paste to illustrate.

    Woman Fencer

    great work!

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    eldritchmonkey - thank you for your comment

    treeshark - wow~!!
    it is great~!! i really really agree with you~!! i learned many things from your post~!!
    thank you~ thank you very much ~!!!!!!

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    nice work and good use of colors.

    all the things I noticed have been said so there's nothing I could add.

    and the advice from treeshark is really really good. really cool to have people giving advice like that :chug:

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    I like the colors that are going on, post more

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    apocalypse-cow, 2kre8 - thank you all very much for your comments~

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