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    creature design

    Here's a project that I'm working on. Don't know where to go from here, any advice on how to make this better at this stage?

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    some nice rendering here. however the creatures left (our right) both hind and fore look out of perspective.

    Ive tried to give u an example - apologies on the roughness.

    theres litterally no room for the paw you had originally - it would be behind his head.

    hope this helps.

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    Hmmm, I don't know, in the version i have, his left paw is lifted up as if he is in the middle of some sort of action. Jerad Marantz did a draw over for me in class at gnomon and it was his idea to put it there in that position, so Im apprehensive to change it. that being said, you are the second person who has said that it doesnt look correct. I'll work on it and see if i can't get it to work out. Thanks for putting in the effort do do a draw over.

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    Oh, and thanks...that back hind leg is off.

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    some revisions

    a little better i think.

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    done for now

    Well, this will do, I have to turn it in for class tomorrow, and I still have 14 environment paintings to do. So this is staying as it is for now.

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