Jondawo: Thank you! You don't sound harsh at all - the advice is all very much appreciated!!
Silwynar: Thanks so much Yeah - it's something that I didn't notice until I uploaded the study! Definitely something I'll pay attention to in future studies!
TFsean: Thanks! Again - will definitely be paying more attention to edges in future pieces, it sounds terrible but it's not really something that ever actually occurred to me to look out for, so it's great that it's been brought to my attention
Just a couple of studies from the moleskine, been a little slack recently, being distracted by highly unproductive things (like trophies on the PS3)!